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- Better point pages in some sources: especially Dupeux, Breuer & Mohler
- Fix spelling, grammar mistakes
- Rely more on Dupeux's (1992) and Breuer's (1993) works
- Introduce other sources to rely less on François' article (2009) — this is just a global summary
- Rely less on Mohler for main thinkers (have worked on it)
- Better word the lead/led to summarise the body
Azerty82 (talk) 20:28, 1 August 2019 (UTC)Reply