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Hello Bellezzasolo, I thought I could disturb you this morning, sorry for that. I am drafting an article and would wish you go through it and propose changes to it. If you find it to be fit for the article page, you can at your capacity move. Kindly talk back so I can finish it up.[[User:Christopher Odhiambo|Christopher Odhiambo]] ([[User talk:Christopher Odhiambo|talk]]) 09:02, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

: {{re|Christopher Odhiambo}}, in my view the tone is still too promotional to move from draftspace, at the moment. I've so far done simple grammatical and stylistic fixes, and am looking at the tone now. [[User:Bellezzasolo|∰'''Bellezzasolo'''✡]] [[User talk:Bellezzasolo|Discuss]] 20:45, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

:{{re|Bellezzasolo}}, Thank you so much. I will as well look at the tone together with you. I appreciate your assistance, and I think it is going to make me enjoy editing in Wikipedia.[[User:Christopher Odhiambo|Christopher Odhiambo]] ([[User talk:Christopher Odhiambo|talk]]) 22:11, 26 January 2019 (UTC)