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:In my opinion, there is nothing wrong with the current intro sentence as it encompasses all of the forms of marriage that exist. (The sentence that follows is pretty ethnocentric though.) --[[User:Newsroom hierarchies|Newsroom hierarchies]] ([[User talk:Newsroom hierarchies#top|talk]]) 01:19, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

::Yes, you're right: there is nothing wrong with the current intro sentence. But I think the intro as a whole could do a better job providing readers with clear understanding of the topic. Check out [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Marriage&oldid=138061274 this] version from a year ago, which was fairly stable for awhile. It feels a bit like we're losing ground! ([[User:Sdsds|sdsds]] - ''[[User talk:Sdsds|talk]]'') 01:28, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

:::Yeah, that is a little better. I'm more or less fine with the way the 'most forms of marriage involve one man, one woman' statement is made there. I never did care for the same sex marriage bit though, since same sex marriages have existed since well before 2001. --[[User:Newsroom hierarchies|Newsroom hierarchies]] ([[User talk:Newsroom hierarchies#top|talk]]) 02:07, 20 June 2008 (UTC)