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::Yes, you're right: there is nothing wrong with the current intro sentence. But I think the intro as a whole could do a better job providing readers with clear understanding of the topic. Check out [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Marriage&oldid=138061274 this] version from a year ago, which was fairly stable for awhile. It feels a bit like we're losing ground! ([[User:Sdsds|sdsds]] - ''[[User talk:Sdsds|talk]]'') 01:28, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

:::Yeah, that is a little better. I'm more or less fine with the way the 'most forms of marriage involve one man, one woman' statement is made there. I never did care for the same sex marriage bit though, since same sex marriages have existed since well before 2001. --[[User:Newsroom hierarchies|Newsroom hierarchies]] ([[User talk:Newsroom hierarchies#top|talk]]) 02:07, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

==Culture==

Good job on addressing many of the issues in [[Culture]]. I am going to re-review the article on 7/18, so please address the remaining issues so that I can pass the article. If you can't find sources for all of the issues in the "needs citations" section, consider removing them from the article and readding them later when sources can be added. If you have any questions or need help on the remaining issues please let me know on my talk page. Happy editing! --[[User:Nehrams2020|Nehrams2020]] ([[User talk:Nehrams2020|talk]]) 07:22, 15 July 2008 (UTC)