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Line 178: :::@[[User:Blanketstitch|Blanketstitch]]: You are supposed to put the {{tl|Done}} tag here so that YiFeiBot can archive this section in 24 hours. [[User:Mox Eden|<span style="background-color: #483D8B; color: #E6E6FA">Mox Eden</span>]] ([[User talk:Mox Eden|talk]]) 08:46, 29 September 2024 (UTC) ::::<small>Thanks Eden. Copy-editor's sig and timestamp added by [[User:Baffle_gab1978|Baffle_gab1978]] ([[User talk:Baffle_gab1978|talk]]) for bot archiving.</small>{{Done}} [[User:Blanketstitch|Blanketstitch]] ([[User talk:Blanketstitch|talk]]) 20:26, 28 September 2024 (UTC) ==Phillip Jeong== <small>[[CC BY-SA]] declaration; this section was copied from the Requests page [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Guild_of_Copy_Editors/Requests&oldid=1248547617#Phillip_Jeong here] by me. See that page's history for full attribution. '''[[User talk:Baffle gab1978|<span style="color:#191960">Baffle☿''gab''</span>]]''' 03:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC) ===[[Phillip Jeong]]=== This is my second article on Wikipedia, and I am enjoying the whole process of collective intelligence. Please help me improve it. I've written the above article and believe I am close to completing it with all the necessary records and citations. As someone who collects historic performances to write articles on Wikipedia, I find it challenging to find detailed critiques in Korea. For example, Leonard Bernstein came to Korea only once, and while newspapers reported what he played, they did not mention his conducting style, orchestration, audience response, etc. I was there, but I cannot cite myself. It is difficult to find articles that can be used as citations for Wikipedia. There are plenty of discussions on social media and blogs, but I understand that these are not acceptable sources. I wouldn't mind if some of the unsubstantiated phrases or sentences need to be deleted. Any help with copyediting or finding reliable sources would be greatly appreciated. [[User:Rosuacamus|Rosuacamus]] ([[User talk:Rosuacamus|talk]]) 11:13, 6 June 2024 (UTC) :Ok I will see if there's any grammar mistakes. [[User:Nedia020415|Ned1a]] [[User talk:Nedia020415|Wanna talk?]] 14:57, 10 June 2024 (UTC) ::I saw that you made a correction. Thanks a lot. Since they sang in Italian, I put the Italian title with the English one in parentheses. I rewrote a chunk of the text because editors say tabulating everything is too excessive. Please advise me on how to remove the box on top. [[User:Rosuacamus|Rosuacamus]] ([[User talk:Rosuacamus|talk]]) 15:46, 10 June 2024 (UTC) :::Hi! @[[User:Rosuacamus|Rosuacamus]] I don't understand what you mean by the box? Do you mean the userbox? [[User:Nedia020415|Ned1a]] [[User talk:Nedia020415|Wanna talk?]] 17:47, 10 June 2024 (UTC) ::::I meant the message box at the top of the [[Phillip Jeong]] article: "This article may require copy editing for grammar, style, cohesion, tone, or spelling." Any help to improve the article is welcome! [[User:Rosuacamus|Rosuacamus]] ([[User talk:Rosuacamus|talk]]) 21:29, 10 June 2024 (UTC) :::::I think to just get rid the the template. [[User:Nedia020415|Ned1a]] [[User talk:Nedia020415|Wanna talk?]] 14:26, 12 June 2024 (UTC) ::::::Can I just do that? [[User:Rosuacamus|Rosuacamus]] ([[User talk:Rosuacamus|talk]]) 14:59, 12 June 2024 (UTC) :::::Thanks a lot! [[User:Rosuacamus|Rosuacamus]] ([[User talk:Rosuacamus|talk]]) 15:02, 12 June 2024 (UTC) ::::::Your welcome! :?D [[User:Nedia020415|Ned1a]] [[User talk:Nedia020415|Wanna talk?]] 15:04, 12 June 2024 (UTC) {{od2}}{{working}} '''[[User talk:Baffle gab1978|<span style="color:#191960">Baffle☿''gab''</span>]]''' 01:30, 30 September 2024 (UTC) :{{Done}} '''[[User talk:Baffle gab1978|<span style="color:#191960">Baffle☿''gab''</span>]]''' 03:35, 30 September 2024 (UTC) | |||