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Nominator: Magentic Manifestations (talk · contribs) 13:41, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 14:18, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Will be reviewing this in a few days! Arconning (talk) 14:18, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
- Use of Games or games needs to be consistent, stay with one.
- I'd suggest to follow other "Nation at the Summer Olympics" articles and start with "Nation competed at the [Year] Summer Olympics in..." to maintain consistency.
- The India team to The Indian team?
- City in infobox needs to be changed.
- Remove unnecessary parameter for female athletes as there are none.
- Dates of the Games needs to be added and cited here.
- The nation made its first Winter Olympics appearance until the 1964 Winter Olympics held in Innsbruck, Austria., this should be reworded The nation made its first Winter Olympics appearance at the 1964 Winter Olympics held in Innsbruck, Austria..
- There was a conflict between the Indian Olympic Association and the Indian Army, add a comma at the end.
- which employed Singh as to who would accompany him to the games, which resulted in a travel delay., this kind of confuses me, could you reword? Please check if it is ok now.
- with his coach former olympian skier Nadeem Iqbal., this should be reworded to with his coach, Olympic-skier Nadeem Iqbal. From my knowledge, an Olympian is always an Olympian as they've participated at an Olympics, whether it's a past one or not.
Cross-country skiing
- No ongoing edit war, focused and broad enough information, neutral.