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This page holds approved nominations that are waiting to appear in the "Did you know" section on the Main Page. Following DYK approval, nominations are processed and moved into a Prep area, and from there, prep sets are promoted to a queue, and then to the main page.

To create a new nomination or to see those that are yet to be approved, see Template talk:Did you know. For the discussion page see WT:DYK. Click on the link to go directly to the Special occasion holding area.

Count of DYK Hooks
Section # of Hooks # Verified
August 4 1
August 5 1
August 7 1
August 8 1
August 11 1
August 14 1
August 20 2 1
August 23 1
August 24 3 2
August 25 6 4
August 26 3 1
August 27 5 4
August 28 4 2
August 29 6 3
August 30 11 2
August 31 5 3
September 1 3 3
September 2 5 2
September 3 4 3
September 4 2 1
September 5 2
September 6 4 1
September 7 7 1
September 8 5 2
September 9 7 3
September 10 6 5
September 11 4 2
September 12 7 2
September 13 3 1
September 14 3 3
September 15 9 3
September 16 7 2
September 17 3 1
September 18 10 7
September 19 7 3
September 20 9 1
September 21 4 1
September 22 6 2
September 23 7
September 24 7 3
September 25 6 2
September 26 7 2
September 27 7 3
September 28 8 5
September 29 7 6
September 30 6 5
October 1 6 5
October 2 1
October 3 8
October 4
Total 239 102
Last updated 01:15, 4 October 2024 UTC
Current time is 02:36, 4 October 2024 UTC [refresh]

This page is for those nominations that have already been approved and are waiting to be promoted. If yours has been approved but has not yet been run on the main page, it should either be on this page or will soon be moved here, or already promoted to a Prep area or Queue ahead of an appearance on the main page.

If you wish to create a new nomination, please go to the Template talk:Did you know page; there are instructions there in a section similar to this one on how to nominate an article for DYK.

Frequently asked questions

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This page is often backlogged. As long as your submission is still on the page, it will stay there until someone promotes it to a preparation area. To alleviate this problem, if the approved page has more than 120 approved hooks, then sets will change twice per day (every 12 hours) instead of once per day (every 24 hours). When the backlog falls below 60 approved nominations set frequency returns to once a day.

If you can't find the nomination you submitted to the nominations page, and it also isn't on this page, in most cases it means your article has been approved and is either in one of the prep areas, has been promoted from prep to a queue, or is on the main page.

If the nominated hook is in none of those places, then the nomination has probably been rejected. Such a rejection usually only occurs if it was at least a couple of weeks old and had unresolved issues for which any discussion had gone stale. If you think your nomination was unfairly rejected, you can query this on the DYK discussion page, but as a general rule such nominations will only be restored in exceptional circumstances.

How to promote an accepted hook

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  • See Wikipedia:Did you know/Preparation areas for full instructions.
  • In one window, open the DYK nomination subpage of the hook you would like to promote.
  • In another window, open the prep set you intend to add the hook to.
  • In the prep set...
    • Paste the hook into the hook area (be sure to not paste in that that)
    • Paste the credit information ({{DYKmake}} and/or {{DYKnom}}) into the credits area.
    • Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted [[Jane Fonda]]", preview, and save
  • Back on DYK nomination page...
    • change {{DYKsubpage to {{subst:DYKsubpage
    • change |passed= to |passed=yes
    • Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted original hook to Prep 3", preview, and save

How to remove a hook from the prep areas or queue

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  • Edit the prep area or queue where the hook is and remove the hook and the credits associated with it.
  • Go to the hook's nomination subpage (there should have been a link to it in the credits section).
    • View the edit history for that page
    • Go back to the last version before the edit where the hook was promoted, and revert to that version to make the nomination active again.
    • Add a new icon on the nomination subpage to cancel the previous tick and leave a comment after it explaining that the hook was removed from the prep area or queue, and why, so that later reviewers are aware of this issue.
  • Add a transclusion of the template back to the nominations page so that reviewers can see it. It goes under the date that it was first created/expanded/listed as a GA. You may need to add back the day header for that date if it had been removed from the nominations page.
  • If you removed the hook from a queue, it is best to either replace it with another hook from one of the prep areas, or to leave a message at WT:DYK asking someone else to do so.
Do not nominate articles in this section—nominate all articles in the nominations section on the regular nominations page, under the date on which the article was created or moved to mainspace, or the expansion began, or it was listed as a Good Article; be sure to indicate in the nomination any request for a specially timed appearance on the main page.
Note: Articles intended to be held for special occasion dates should be nominated within seven days of creation, start of expansion, or promotion to Good Article status. The nomination should be made between at least one week prior to the occasion date, to allow time for reviews and promotions through the prep and queue sets, but not more than six weeks in advance. The proposed occasion must be deemed sufficiently special by reviewers. The timeline limitations, including the six week maximum, may be waived by consensus, if a request is made at WT:DYK, but requests are not always successful. Discussion clarifying the hold criteria can be found here: [1]; discussion setting the six week limit can be found here: [2].
April Fools' Day hooks are exempted from the timeline limit; see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know.
Note for promoters: please be sure to add an "invisible" comment after a hook when you've placed it in prep, noting that it's a special occasion hook and including the date it is supposed to run. This should keep the hook from being moved after promotion, as sometimes happens to hooks when a queue needs a slot filled or a prep set needs to be made more balanced by swapping hooks between preps.

November 7 (after US election polls close)

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Allison Reese

Moved to mainspace by Bsoyka (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 22 past nominations.

Bsoyka (tcg) 03:23, 5 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:   - If ALT1 is approved, then reference [1] needs to be repeated directly after the sentence "Soon after this, at the age of 22, she came out as a lesbian through a group text message to her parents, who were both supportive of her sexuality." This is necessary per WP:DYKHFC, which says "The facts of the hook in the article should be cited no later than the end of the sentence in which they appear."

Overall:   Bsoyka Nice work on this article. I think ALT0 is the most interesting as well, but ALT1 might also work. I'm not sure about ALT2, since many influencers get millions of views for whatever it is that they're known for. Epicgenius (talk) 19:11, 30 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Bsoyka, Epicgenius, and Kimikel: Just noting that I have pulled this from prep 1 as there is already a Kamala hook in queue 7 and there's another in a later prep. I have not in any way assessed the article.--Launchballer 14:09, 14 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Pulled per WT:DYK#Allison Reese and WP:DYKELECT. Not the nom's fault, and so this shouldn't be timed out. I've moved it to SOHA.--Launchballer 22:10, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 20

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Jools Lebron

Created by Willthacheerleader18 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 247 past nominations.

Launchballer 16:54, 25 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Article is new enough, long enough, well sourced and neutral. Earwig picked up one phrase, which I think should be re-written: "...individuals with no known connection to Lebron separately tried to register demure-related trademarks ..." which is in the Indpendent source. Hook is cited and interesting. QPQ is done. I like the snappy ALT1. Once the phrase is re-written, should be good to go. Lajmmoore (talk) 11:44, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Lajmmoore: I believe I have satisfied your concerns.--Launchballer 12:23, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Perfect Launchballer, thank you so much Lajmmoore (talk) 13:26, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 24

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Statue of John Stockton

  • ... that the sculptor re-positioned the statue of John Stockton about 20 times by using a wrench to adjust ball-and-socket joints on steel rods?

Moved to mainspace by Left guide (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Left guide (talk) 13:53, 26 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

References

  1. ^ Robinson, Doug (June 14, 2004). "Sculpting Stockton no way a slam-dunk". Deseret News. Retrieved August 24, 2024.
  2. ^ Kalbrosky, Bryan (January 25, 2022). "Somebody put a mask on a John Stockton statue because he refuses to do it himself". USA Today. Retrieved August 24, 2024.
  3. ^ McCarriston, Shanna (January 25, 2022). "Fan puts face mask on John Stockton statue outside of Jazz's Vivint Arena". CBS Sports. Retrieved August 24, 2024.
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:     Fun little DYK, was kind of neat to learn more about the statue and how the everything came together. All in all it looks fine, no copyvio issues, and article is long enough. I'm not a huge fan of the second hook, it's not as interesting as learning about the process that was taken to make the statue. One minor note to the nominator, it was kind of a pain to go through the article history since you moved it over from your sandbox. Maybe consider using draft space next time. Dr vulpes (Talk) 15:44, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Dr vulpes: Thank you, glad to know you enjoy it! I personally find the first hook to be more interesting also, but my main qualm is that it seems somewhat difficult to include all of the useful details while keeping it reasonably simple and catchy for the average reader. As to the last point, my interest in working on specific topics comes and goes and seems totally random, so I often try to save things in userspace rather than draftspace to avoid the automatic deletion after 6 months, which has happened before. Left guide (talk) 01:30, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Left guide: I 100% feel you on that! I was going over it and it took me a little bit for it to click. No worries just glad you got it here to DYK. Dr vulpes (Talk) 03:09, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

UnMetal

  • Source: Almost every review and article about the game, but here's two

Created by AdoTang (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

AdoTang (talk) 02:40, 25 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   The plot section does not have inline sourcing, but this is not required per MOS:PLOTSOURCE. ALT2 talks about using a bedpan to save and needing to empty it to save again, which is not exactly what the hook says. It may need to be reworded if it is the hook chosen, but I believe other hooks are more interesting anyway, especially ALT3. The source provided for ALT3 does not mention humanitarian aid, but this is mentioned in other sources in the article. I believe this DYK is ready to go. Muhandes (talk) 11:04, 26 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 25

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Pell v The Queen

Moved to mainspace by MaxnaCarta (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 13 past nominations.

MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:59, 27 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • Any takers? It's been three weeks since I nominated. My nomination remains valid, but I'm hoping to attract the eyes of someone scrolling past given the length of time it has been since I nominated. Happy for a QPQ from someone. — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 07:40, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Comment about the hook and BLP: George Pell died on 10 January 2023, so he is no longer a living person. Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons#Recently dead or probably dead (WP:BDP) says:

    Generally, this policy does not apply to material concerning people who are confirmed dead by reliable sources. The only exception would be for people who have recently died, in which case the policy can extend for an indeterminate period beyond the date of death—six months, one year, two years at the outside. Such extensions would apply particularly to contentious or questionable material about the subject that has implications for their living relatives and friends, such as in the case of a possible suicide or particularly gruesome crime.

    It has been over 20 months since the subject's death so I don't think the BLP policy applies to him anymore. If it did apply to him, then WP:DYKHOOKBLP would be applicable. WP:DYKHOOKBLP says:

    Hooks must adopt a neutral point of view. Hooks that unduly focus on negative aspects of living persons should be avoided. Note that this is a stricter requirement than BLP as a whole: a sentence that might be due weight in the article can become undue if used in the hook, as all of the surrounding context of the individual's wider life is missing.

    The hook could be seen as putting focus on negative aspect of the subject's life (in mentioning the conviction even though it also says the conviction was overturned), but as WP:BDP does not apply, I do not think WP:DYKHOOKBLP is violated.

    MaxnaCarta (talk · contribs), thank you for writing this important article on a difficult subject matter. Cunard (talk) 08:59, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

  •   Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 08:59, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Self-Ish

Created by Koopastar (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Koopastar (talk) 07:11, 31 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article is both new and long enough. No copyright violation. Article is presentable. Both sources are cited, one with one with a local newspaper and a student newspaper. No QPQ necessary. I feel the ALT1 is more interesting. I also think it might make more sense, in the original proposal, for the word "express" to be replaced with the word "portray" or "depict". Overall a solid nomination. RoundSquare (talk) 06:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Manuel Osa Nsue Nsua

  • ... that a banker was named the prime minister of Equatorial Guinea to succeed a government that resigned for being "ineffective"?
  • Source: News Central Africa ("Equatorial Guinea’s President Teodoro Obiang Nguema Mbasogo has appointed former bank chief Manuel Osa Nsue Nsua as prime minister, following a decree issued nearly three weeks after the previous government resigned for being 'ineffective.'")
  • ALT1: ... that a banker was named his country's prime minister to succeed a government that resigned for being "ineffective"? Source: same
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alfred Sully
  • Comment: Open to other ways of wording or other ALT hooks. Was hoping to get this Equatoguinean featured in some way (since not many get featured after all - this would be only the country's third-ever DYK bio!).

Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 240 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:54, 25 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   You barely made the 7-day period! The hook is a little confusing, but oh well. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 14:03, 30 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Palace Theater Light

Created by Panamitsu (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 47 past nominations.

Panamitsu (talk) 06:20, 25 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   I am okay with sourcing as spot checks passed. However, I think you should actually link all the newspaper articles where possible so that any reviewing admin can also verify the sources. — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 01:44, 26 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • @Panamitsu: I need you to please fix source 4, cited several times. Atlas Obscura articles are user-generated and user-editable with minimal oversight, and the site's terms of use includes disclaimers about user submissions. Many of the "places" articles cite Wikipedia as a source of their information or otherwise lack clear or reliable sourcing. Per WP:GUNREL: These articles should generally not be referenced on Wikipedia. I personally would have no issue with you using this source once or twice for something uncontroversial, however unfortunately for an article to appear on the Main Page, I don't think this source is gonna cut it. I can seek a second opinion if you want, but I would hate to approve it only for an admin to step in and decline to post...— MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:37, 26 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • @MaxnaCarta: Thanks for telling me this, I hadn't seen this website before. I've removed it now. Luckily the other sources were already used for the same information so I didn't have to make many changes, except for removing a name and a year. ―Panamitsu (talk) 02:54, 26 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Panamitsu: all good, thanks for actioning so fast. I will review the rest of the sources and come back to you. I dont anticipate any issues. Looks okay from here. Cheers — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:57, 26 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
MaxnaCarta Is this ready to go? SL93 (talk) 23:21, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 26

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Tauba Tauba (song)

5x expanded by KunalAggarwal95 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 06:40, 27 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:   - no, ALT1 -> sources in article refer to charts released after the date of release, so not "ahead of the film's 19 July 2024", and are not the sources in the hook
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   created July 2024, 5x expanded up to 26 August, but over more than 20 days not new enough Bogger (talk) 13:46, 3 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

But this is not mentioned in the DYK rules that article must be expanded within 20 days. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 18:26, 3 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  •   Article qualifies as a 5x expansion as the expansion began on 26 August (per DYKcheck), the same day it was nominated at DYK. Creation date is not relevant in the case of a more recent 5x expansion, the date that matters was the date the expansion began. Pinging reviewer Bogger, to let them know that their review was based on a misunderstanding of the DYK rules. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:40, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Bogger ALT2: ... that Karan Aujla's Hindi-language single "Tauba Tauba" from the film Bad Newz became a Billboard Canadian Hot 100 Top 25 ahead of the film's 19 July 2024 release? Source: https://www.billboard.com/charts/canadian-hot-100/2024-07-20/
I have replaced the old chart sources with the hook sources. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 10:18, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
updated sources for ALT1 look good, approved ALT1, ALT2   -Bogger (talk) 11:19, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 27

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You Liked This (Okay, Computer!)

Created by Koopastar (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Koopastar (talk) 05:22, 5 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • Comment: Hi, Koopastar. I'm interested in reviewing this article. Please make sure the hooks are linked in the body of the article. I don't see ALT1 fully linked in the article. I see portions of it unsourced in the lead instead. How do you feel about removing all the other links from ALT1 so that only You Liked This (Okay, Computer!) is linked? This could help increase traffic to your nomination and prevent people from clicking on the other links instead. Viriditas (talk) 00:09, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Ivanvector: Following your suggestion of removing the links, I propose the following hook:
  • ALT1a: ... that the music video for "You Liked This (Okay, Computer!)" ends with an anthropomorphic lizard on the Moon alongside the phrase "Wake Up Sheeple!" on a billboard?
Also, the hook isn't from the lead but rather is sourced in the music video section, from "anthropomorphic lizard" to the end of the first paragraph, followed by the article additionally supplemented for this DYK nomination. If this is incorrect in a way that I don't realize though, apologies. Koopastar (talk) 01:10, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi Koopastar, I think you meant to ping Viriditas here, they are reviewing your article, not me. Cheers! Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 17:31, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Sorry about that, copied the ping function from my previous nomination since I'm not used to DYK not having a reply function yet. @Viriditas: Here's a proper ping. Koopastar (talk) 20:03, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Apologies, in response to the above, I was talking about ALT0, but typed ALT1 by accident. ALT1 checks out. Like you said, the content for ALT1 is in the music video section. I still can't find ALT0 sourced. Viriditas (talk)
The lead content used in ALT0 is a rewording of the first sentence of the composition section, which is sourced by [7]. I opted to have the lead be different phrasing of the body so as not to create redundancy, but if necessary I can copy or swap the phrase down to have it be behind a source. Koopastar (talk) 20:59, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Some nominators will duplicate the ref just for the DYK, and after it appears in the main page, they will remove it. This shows the reviewer and others that the hooks are cited, even if it unnecessarily duplicates the ref for a brief period of time. Viriditas (talk) 21:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Both alts should be good now, as I made an edit to the article. Koopastar (talk) 21:18, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
I will finish up the review now. The only question I have is about the use of interview sources to support this material, which is sort of tricky since they ride the line between primary and secondary sources, and I tend to want to see secondary sources for hooks, however, I'm not seeing anything that is controversial or unusual, so I think we are almost good to go. I'll ping you if I have any questions. Viriditas (talk) 21:41, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Koopastar: Thanks for your good work on this article. I have a few questions:

  • Not a big deal, but in terms of reader expectations, I did expect to see a mention of either the spoken word or musique concrète genres (or both) in the lead. I realize you have them in the infobox, but as a fan of musique concrète, I was wondering why it was absent from the lead. Viriditas (talk) 22:34, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • In 2021, Will Wood took inspiration from Radiohead's "Fitter Happier"...In tribute to his inspiration, Wood directly included the song's origin album OK Computer (1997) as part of the title in parentheses.
  • I see why you wrote it this way, but I'm concerned the general reader might be a touch confused. I always try to write for a reader that knows nothing about the topic. In this regard, you don't say "Fitter Happier" is a song or track; could you specify this outright? It may seem obvious to you and I, but not everyone is a music maven. Also, it is slightly confusing that you wait until the end of the paragraph to tell the reader the name of the album. How about adding that "Wood took inspiration from Radiohead's song "Fitter Happier" from the album OK Computer (1997)" at the beginning? And then at the end, simply saying "Wood directly included the song's origin album as part of the title in parentheses", since we already know that? It's okay if you disagree, but it did stand out to me after reading the article several times. Viriditas (talk) 22:07, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Following "Cicada Days" in May 2022, Wood began teasing the release of the new single on YouTube.
  • Same thing here. Maybe "Following the single "Cicada Days"..." I realize that sounds redundant given what follows, but I find it helpful to prompt the reader, especially those who don't know what "Cicada Days" is here. Viriditas (talk) 22:18, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • The single was published on June 10. On "In case I make it," (2022), it appears as the tenth song, which is followed by "The Main Character" as a thematic successor.
  • A bit of narrative, chronological continuity might help here. "The single was published on June 10, 2022, followed by the album In case I make it on July 29, where it appears as the tenth song..." Do it however you want, but I was curious about the dates here. Viriditas (talk) 22:31, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Standing's voice is represented by a wired mannequin head with screens, who begins speaking over sheep jumping across a fence
  • Should "screens" be "television screens"? Should "begins speaking over" have "begins speaking over images of sheep jumping across a fence", added? I've never seen "screens" used by itself here. I've seen computer screens, television screens, etc. Maybe I'm just dumb? Viriditas (talk) 23:50, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • The video was written by Wood and Horvath as a story, contrasting live performance music videos. He took inspiration...
  • Review:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Good to go. Prefer ALT1a but ALT0 is fine as well. ALT1 is my third choice, but is also fine. Viriditas (talk) 22:20, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Note: @Viriditas and Koopastar: I believe both ALT1 and ALT1a fail WP:DYKFICTION, and ALT0 is rather difficult to parse. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:28, 1 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yeah, I agree. I missed that one, but caught it on the second nom, where we are now trying to work out a real world hook. I crossed out my approval up above. Koopastar, let's get some new hooks focused on the real world. Viriditas (talk) 20:22, 1 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Viriditas: Here are some newer hooks. Koopastar (talk) 23:25, 1 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Koopastar: Thank you. I apologize for the extra time you have had to put into this. Regarding ALT2, I think it would be best to rewrite it as it is confusing in its current form. The takeaway for me is that Bev Standing 1) was the original text-to-speech TikTok voice, and that 2) she worked with Will Wood to provide the voice for "You Liked This". I'm not convinced we need to mention her voice was used nonconsensually by TikTok in the hook as that is entirely tangential to the song here, and you already link to that background info when people click on her name. Viriditas (talk) 20:20, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Viriditas: Here's that one rewritten:
Koopastar (talk) 21:11, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Koopastar: I like it, but to increase hits and visits to your article, try to reverse what you wrote, with the link to the song in the beginning. ("... that Will Wood's song...features Bev Standing...) Viriditas (talk) 21:19, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Viriditas: How's this? Koopastar (talk) 21:32, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Approve ALT2b. ALT2a and ALT3 also okay, but second choice. I do not like ALT2. Viriditas (talk) 21:38, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hermética (album)

5x expanded by Cambalachero (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 124 past nominations.

Cambalachero (talk) 15:08, 28 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

Cécile Fatiman

Improved to Good Article status by Grnrchst (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 41 past nominations.

Grnrchst (talk) 09:15, 28 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  Interesting GA biography, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. Of the hooks, I prefer ALT1, by far. "Possessed" is too ambiguous a word, and that spirit not known (at least to me). I like the description of the ceremony better than labelling her as priestess (ALT2), and ALT3 says nothing more than the obvious: that we didn't know her ;) - In the article, I'd say something about the lead image, such as "depiction". Seems to be someone's dream of her ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:29, 28 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Barry Green (hunter)

Created by Di (they-them) (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.

Di (they-them) (talk) 01:53, 27 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   References were spot-checked for verification; no issues arose. Yue🌙 04:22, 28 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Di (they-them) is there an independent RS that describes Green as a conservationist? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:03, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
AirshipJungleman29 The ABC article source says that Mr Green has been widely recognised for his two decades of conservation work, including by Natural Resources Kangaroo Island. The award from the South Australian government, which can be seen at 28 seconds into the ABC video source, describes him as a dedicated, hands-on environmentalist. So, while the word "conservationist" isn't necessarily used, I think these essentially say the exact same thing. If that's an issue, I'd be fine with tweaking the hook to say "an Australian environmentalist" instead. Di (they-them) (talk) 21:22, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 28

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Kitsap (Suquamish leader)

  • Source: Buerge (2017)[3] p.33: "....when the Suquamish chief Kitsap organized a confederacy to meet a threat from the north."

Ibid. p. 41-42: "The most feared were the Cowichan ... Slave raids had led the Cowichan far from their homes in search of human merchandise ... by spreading havoc on the sound, they likely intended to eliminate rivals and make the HBC come to them"

Ibid. p.42: "The confederation Kitsap engineered stretched from central Puget Sound to the Columbia River, and Old Man House was its nexus."

Ibid. p. 43: "The attack likely took place around 1825 ... Kitsap and other Suquamish men took the lead"

    • Reviewed:

Created by PersusjCP (talk) and SeaTraff (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

PersusjCP (talk) 16:51, 28 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  Reviewing... Flibirigit (talk) 21:44, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:   - ?
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   The article was expanded more than fivefold (2,024 to 12,369 characters) when comparing the pre-expansion version on May 7, 2024, to the nominated version on August 28, 2024. Length and sourcing are adequate. The article appears neutral in tone, and no plagiarism concerns were found. The proposed hook is interesting, but its citation needs some work. As per WP:DYKCRIT, the sentence(s) which support the hooks require citation immediately following. The hooks is supported by several sentences, but not all of them have a citation. No image is included in this nomination, but all images in the article have a free Commons license. The nominator has supplied a QPQ, although it was not required. Overall, the expanded article is a welcome contribution to Wikipedia and needs only minor work for DYK. Flibirigit (talk) 22:09, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Afrique Victime

  • ... that Mdou Moctar's Afrique Victime was also released on Nokia devices (specifically the Nokia 6120) to honor his former albums?

Improved to Good Article status by TheNuggeteer (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 19 past nominations.

🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 03:41, 28 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   GA status confirmed, date is fine. Various GA-related quality aspects confirmed as meeting DYK standards. Still needs a QPQ review. Hook needs improvements; not Nokia devices, but a single device (the article states "In homage to his first albums, which he spread using Bluetooth, he released a collector's edition Nokia 6120 handset."). And while this is not a DYK concern, I think this part of the article should be expanded - how can one spread albums using Bluetooth? How does one include an album in a handset (the source states it was pre-loaded onto a classic handset, which is confusing - what exactly was that item)? If I was a GA reviewer I'd expect this to be addressed (expanded with clarifications in the text). Ping GA reviewer User:Vigilantcosmicpenguin.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:02, 29 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Finished the hook request. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:04, 29 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Piotrus: Hello? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:57, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:17, 18 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 29

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Great Salt Lake whale hoax

  • ... that in 1888, a sensational story claimed that a British scientist, James Wickham, introduced two whales to the Great Salt Lake in an attempt to start a whale oil industry?

Moved to mainspace by RadicalUranium (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

OhHaiMark (talk) 17:09, 29 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

IMAX Melbourne

Created by Mjks28 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Mjks28 (talk) 01:03, 29 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • General eligibility:
  • New enough:  
  • Long enough:  
  • Other problems:   - Article was nominated 9 days after being moved to mainspace. The limit is 7 days.
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Cambalachero (talk) 18:39, 29 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Cambalachero: Per WP:DYKNEW, "The seven-day limit can be extended for a day or two upon request." For a relatively new nominator, I'd take this.--Launchballer 00:04, 30 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
OK Cambalachero (talk) 14:53, 30 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Episode 7921

  • ... that Episode 7921 of Neighbours features Australia's first televised same-sex wedding since the country voted in favour of legalising same-sex marriage?

Moved to mainspace by JuneGloom07 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 92 past nominations.

JuneGloom07 Talk 02:42, 29 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Unfortunately, I doubt this will be ready for mainspace on September 3. Nominations for a specific date should be made at least a week before, September 3 is in just 5 days. Cambalachero (talk) 19:14, 29 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 30

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Brittni Mason

Queen of Hearts (talk) 20:10, 30 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article was 5x expanded on August 30, so is new enough. At over 2000 characters, it is long enough. The article is properly referenced with in-line citations. The hook is interesting, short enough, and cited in-line. No copyvio issues noted with Earwig's. The QPQ has been done. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 23:00, 1 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Edmonds Band Rotunda

Created by Panamitsu (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 48 past nominations.

Panamitsu (talk) 07:50, 30 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

Overall:   A bit uninteresting, but looks good. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 14:17, 30 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • Nice article, I found the fact it was a restaurant to be quite interesting/unique, heritage buildings often get rebuilt but a rotunda serving as a restaurant paints quite an interesting thought in my mind. Traumnovelle (talk) 07:06, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Seconding Traumnovelle, my only comment is that the hook is a bit boring. I think a more interesting one might be something like ...that the small basement of the Edmonds Band Rotunda was once used as a kitchen?. And thank you for including my photo! David Palmer//cloventt (talk) 20:35, 22 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on August 31

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Diplodus argenteus

The Silver porgy, Diplodus argenteus, photographed off the coast of Cabo Frio, Brazil

  • ... that despite being commonly found off the coast of country, the etymology of Diplodus argenteus' name has nothing to do with Argentina?
  • ALT1 ...that while adult Silver porgies prefer to inhabit the surf zone, juveniles prefer tidepools while sub-adults frequent beds of seagrass? Sources: Wells, V. Carpenter, C. 2011. A Field Guide to Coastal Fishes from Maine to Texas. Baltimore. Johns Hopkins University Press. Robins, C.R. and G.C. Ray, 1986. A field guide to Atlantic coast fishes of North America. Houghton Mifflin Company, Boston, U.S.A. 354 p. Cervigón, F., 1993. Los peces marinos de Venezuela. Volume 2. Fundación Científica Los Roques, Caracas,Venezuela. 497 p.
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Huang Shaoqiang

Created by Ryan shell (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

Ryan shell (talk) 19:10, 2 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing:   - I will kindly AGF the offline sources, but many parts of the article is unsourced. Paragraph four has an unsourced statement, and the "Biology" paragraph is unsourced; there’s also one ending in "FAO REF?". Ref 1 doesn't specify it's a "gamefish" beyond vague "if fished incidentally" (which doesn't clarify individual scale nor if it's done commercially or recreationally, especially when next to "commercial importance") nor mention angling. I can't seem to find the 2.5g weight in ref 11. Ref 16 doesn’t say “the silver porgy is generally standoffish and seldom approaches divers”; while it says “D. argenteus had always been seen in the gulfs”, it doesn’t go beyond only a few year-round divers identifying the species. "Or anything to do with Argentina's etymology" seems so OR-y and debatable; both of them come from the same Latin word.
  • Neutral:  
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:  
  • Other problems:   - “fairly high probably” should be “fairly high probability”
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

QPQ:   - None provided.
Overall:   Nom four days after creation and size at 3871. There are several sourcing issues you'll have to fix, as well as a QPQ to provide; see above. Also, it would help if you could provide online links to the refs since it'll make the reviewers' jobs better; I had to find some of them myself with the WP:LIBRARY providing access to some of them, and I’ve linked them in the refs. And please refrain from using redundant sources; I only needed 12/13 to verify one of the claims that also had ref 9 attached. ミラP@Miraclepine 22:13, 2 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

I believe I've fixed most of the more pressing issues around left over annotations and poor sourcing. That said, I recognize that there could be a case to be made for OR and have provided an alternative hook, that I am much more in favor of using. In the coming day's I'll probably delete or rewrite problematic areas as I dig up and cross check source problems. Ryan shell (talk) 02:53, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
The most pressing issue is the missing QPQ. They are due at the time of nomination and if it is still missing a week later, the nomination will be rejected. Schwede66 18:30, 7 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Just finished QPQ for the nom of Huang Shaoqiang. Not sure if adding it here will suffice or notRyan shell (talk) 20:05, 7 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Ryan shell: While the ALT1 seems boring, I'm fine with ALT0 because the issue I raised was on being related to Argentina's etymology but not Argentina the country. That said, while the gamefish issue has been fixed - I crossed off the ref 16 issue because I put in the wrong ref, silly me - no other issues have been resolved and the article still has unsourced paragraphs. BTW I'm pretty sure it's more convenient to add the QPQ in the "Reviewed" line. ミラP@Miraclepine 15:25, 9 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@ミラP Mission citations related to the Biology section and fisheries information has been cited. Uncited issue in paragraph four has also been cited. The 'probably' into 'probability' typo has also been corrected. Ryan shell (talk) 20:35, 14 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Ryan shell: Have checked the sources and I can finally   approve ALT0. I'm not sure ALT1 is hooky enough though, and even if it is "silver porgies" should be uncapitalized. ミラP@Miraclepine 21:28, 14 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Trade Fair Palace

Created by CitrusHemlock (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

CitrusHemlock 14:19, 5 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:   - I find ALT0 to be interesting, but I'm not sure on the rest. For ALT1, the reader would have to look up what the Slav Epic is, and for ALT2, this doesn't seem really unusual (either it was rebuilt or it was not).

Overall:   Epicgenius (talk) 13:55, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Deep Cut Gardens

Created by FossilDS (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

FossilDS (talk) 03:24, 31 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 1

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Svayamvara

The Svayamvara ceremony of princess Damayanti by Warwick Goble, 1913

  • ... that in ancient Indian literature, princesses would select their husbands from a lineup of suitors or through public contests in the distinctive matrimonial tradition called Svayamvara (pictured)?
  • Source: A Dictionary of Hinduism, Oxford Publications "For the daughter of a royal or a kṣatriya family, a way of selecting a husband which takes the form of either of a public contest between her suitors, or an assembly at which the bride-to-be simply chooses between them. Perhaps the best-known instances occur in the Mahābhārata, where Arjuna wins Draupadī by this method, and Damayantī prefers Nala to any of the assembled gods."
  • Brockington, John L (2006). "Epic Svayaṃvaras, Voice of the Orient: a Tribute to Prof. Upendranath Dhal". Academia.edu: 35–42.
  • Reviewed:

5x expanded by Seyamar (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 06:05, 3 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •  : Seems new and long enough, almost entirely written by nominator; I have a few very minor problems with the sourcing that I think can be resolved by just copying some nearby sources, which I tagged: specifically, I think there should be a citation for the 1st paragraph of "Svayamvara in the Rg Veda" and one place in the 1st paragraph of "Damayantī's Svayamvara". Also, I think it would be more clear if the source at the end of the last paragraph of the lead were duplicated to the first two paragraphs as well if it applies to them, and per the DYK guidelines, I think that the source given has to be present at the end of the sentence giving the claim present in the hook. Don't see any neutrality issues. Article is (listing criteria) presentable, image & hook seem good, no other complaints. As for copyvio, not sure what the standards are on manual "spot-checks", so I'm leaving that for a second reviewer. Mrfoogles (talk) 04:59, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@User:Mrfoogles, done what you have suggested.Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 06:23, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Citation problems seem resolved, all that's left is a copyright check. Mrfoogles (talk) 16:53, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  I was hoping someone else would also double-check my copyright checking (which is done, but I’m new), but that doesn’t seem to be happening anytime soon, so I’ll approve it. Mrfoogles (talk) 14:52, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Mrfoogles: Is the review completed?Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 18:26, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
The green check in the circle means yes (it's a special DYK one that means it was accepted). Mrfoogles (talk) 18:34, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Z1720 Any update, it has been passed quite a long ago.Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 17:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Seyamar: The article is at WP:DYKNA: it will be moved into a prep set when there is an open spot. Z1720 (talk) 18:13, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Joan McIntyre (activist)

  • ... that activist Joan McIntyre left Friends of the Earth to start her own organization focused on stopping the whaling activities of Japan and Russia?

Created by Silver seren (talk) and Thriley (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 127 past nominations.

SilverserenC 23:05, 1 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Silver seren (talk · contribs) and Thriley (talk · contribs), I verified that the article is long enough and that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking.

    Regarding the hook, "Joan And The Whales" says, "She had been special projects coordinator of Friends of the Earth ...". I will take this as verifying that she left Friends of the Earth to start her own organization.

    I checked the Wikipedia article and could not find where it says "left Friends of the Earth to start her own organization". Would you add this to the Wikipedia article or quote the text where it says this in case I missed it? Thank you, Cunard (talk) 09:27, 3 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

I've added that additional note to the sentence about her forming Project Jonah. Good clarification! Thanks, Cunard. SilverserenC 22:07, 3 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  verified, thank you! Cunard (talk) 07:39, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

WCCN, Wisconsin Pavilion

5x expanded by Sammi Brie (talk) and Epicgenius (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 710 past nominations.

Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 18:04, 1 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

Overall:   I prefer ALT1; not sure the first hook is interesting enough. Important question - I'm not sure if the expansion of the radio station article suffices, as it appears to incorporate through merger what was in another article. A second set of eyes on that issue, or explanation by the nom, would be helpful. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:587E:4EDE:255:173E (talk) 22:16, 1 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 2

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Myvanwy Rhys

Created by Manxshearwater (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 100 past nominations.

Lajmmoore (talk) 20:46, 3 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:   - I’m concerned the hook may not be legible to many readers; I am reasonably interested in related topics and still had not heard of Millicent Fawcett, and the entry does not explain.

Overall:   Thank you for nominating this interesting and worthy entry! If I could make one general recommendation for making this important topic more accessible to the non-specialist reader, I think regardless of the hook, the entry could benefit from a few words explaining who Fawcett was, and likewise to explain what the Bangor dispute was (currently it’s a bit mysterious). As to the hook, I wonder if it would be more interesting to say something like:

Tell me what you think. Innisfree987 (talk) 05:34, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

 

Wigwam (Welsh band)

  • ... that Wigwam (pictured) formed four days before their first concert?
  • Source: Y Selar, issue 54 (August 2018), page 11 - "Nathon ni ffurfio pedwar diwrnod cyn ein gig cyntaf achos odd angen band arall i chwara' set [...] yng Nghlwb Ifor Bach blwyddyn dwetha." ("We formed four days before our first gig because another band was needed to play a set [...] in Clwb Ifor Bach last year.")
  • ALT1: ... that Wigwam (pictured) only formed to play a single concert, but have been performing together for seven years? Source: Same source as ALT0 ("last year" in that context is 2017, so it's been seven years) + "Drymiwr Wigwam yn bencampwr dawnsio’r byd" - "I ddechrau, jyst i wneud one-off gig oedd o. [...] Gwnaethon ni benderfynu cario ymlaen, dal ati gydag ymarfer, wedyn gwnaethon ni ddechrau ysgrifennu cerddoriaeth efo’n gilydd. Erbyn hyn, rydym wedi rhyddhau albwm a phedair sengl." ("At the start, it was just to do a one-off gig. [...] We decided to carry on, kept practicing, then we started writing music together. By now, we've released an album and four singles.")
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ron Tiavaasue

Created by Suntooooth (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 23:10, 2 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   The article was long enough and new enough at the time of the nomination. I did not find any close paraphrasing, and the article is properly sourced. I am assuming good faith for the sources as they are in Welsh, although for DYK purposes the provided translations above should be fine. A QPQ has been done. I'm approving only the original hook as it's shorter, snappier, and probably more intriguing. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:56, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Narutolovehinata5: Thank you for the review! But I'm not sure why you've specifically approved only one hook when there's nothing actually wrong with the other one - surely it's up to the prep builders to choose which hook is more interesting. (I say this because I think ALT1 is a little more interesting personally, and is in a pretty common hook style.) Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 15:30, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
While I thought ALT1 was also a surprising and interesting hook, I thought the fact about them being formed four days before the gig, as opposed to simply being intended to be a one-time thing, was more unusual and eye-catching. In addition, it's also a shorter hook and arguably punchier. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:56, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Anna Haifisch

  • ... that the comics character The Artist shares a common temperament with its creator, cartoonist Anna Haifisch (pictured)?

Created by Munfarid1 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 23 past nominations.

Munfarid1 (talk) 20:13, 6 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • QPQ is required at the time of nomination. Schwede66 18:49, 7 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Ok, I shall review this (after all). Schwede66 04:34, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  •   The article is a new translation and plenty long enough. There are a variety of issues with the content that need tidying up. For a start, the year and place of birth are unreferenced, which is a violation of WP:BLPPRIVACY. Either you find sources or you must remove those details. I noticed a mixture of British and American English; settle on one (personally, I would use British English but it's entirely up to you). The list of print media at the end of the section "Life and career" should all be shown in italic font. Same with the newspaper's part of the title Los Angeles Times Book Prize. In the section "Selected publications", the last three entries need either the ISBN number added, or a reference, or removed from that list. Otherwise, the referencing is fine. The article is neutral. Earwig is clean. With regards to the hook fact, you quote “but the protagonist does have a lot in common with me in terms of temperament.” (you need to use square quote marks, by the way, not curly ones), you need to point me to where it says that in the source as I can't see it. The hook is interesting (to me, at least). Should others have issues with interestingness, there are certainly plenty of other good hooks possible. I won't be able to sign off on the image, I'm afraid. It says that it's supplied by the subject (ok, fine, she could have used a tripod, however unlikely that is, though) but the uploader is not the subject. It therefore needs to go through the Volunteer Response Team before it can technically be used. QPQ has been done. All in all, there's a wee bit of tidy up work to do but it shouldn't take you long, Munfarid1. Schwede66 05:13, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi @User:Schwede66, thanks for your close review. I have taken care of all the issues you pointed out and changed the picture. As most sources give Leipzig and 1986 as her POB and DOB, I have changed that and added a source for this in the lead. (I am not aware that this would have to be repeated in the infobox now, but if so, please let me know.) I did not see any inconsistencies between British and American English in the text, and would prefer to leave it as is. (Again, if you see any, please let me know.) - Also, I have added the correct source of the quote, and apoligize for the mistaken source that you rightly pointed out. Munfarid1 (talk) 11:09, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
  "travelled" and "colour" is British English (traveled; color), while "characterized" and "organized" is American English (characterised; organised). Which one shall it be? I had fixed the quotation marks for you as the manual of style requires us to use square marks (") but you changed it back to something else (″). Whilst not the most important issue at all, we might as well get it right. The licensing of the new image is fine, but the lighting is suboptimal. ALT0 is now referenced. Not sure how I managed to overlook the other two hooks. I’m not sure about ALT1; there’s a bit of synthesis going on. ALT2 is fine. Schwede66 17:23, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Well, I wasn't aware that you had changed the quotation marks and understood that I should change them. Actually, I used the special character in WP drop-down menue, and only now read that this is not what MOS requires. So I just changed this again to square marks. - As to the spelling of -ize, this is not exclusively American, but also Oxford spelling and accepted by many British, Commonwealth and international organizations, as well as by MOS:IZE. - I hope this will sort out any doubts on your part for the go-ahead of this DYK. Munfarid1 (talk) 18:48, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Good to go. I had never read MOS:IZE; good to learn something. Good work. Schwede66 03:27, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Yang Pao-an

Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 678 past nominations.

 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:01, 3 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   @Crisco 1492: Hi Chris! Overall, this is a well-sourced and well-written article. It was submitted on the day it was created, so it is new enough. Earwig also shows that the article is copyvio free. However, I have some concerns about the hook. I do not find it particularly interesting, and the reason for Yang's execution is not clearly conveyed. The People's Daily source cited in this nomination mentions that Chiang Kai-shek personally called Yang before ordering his execution, which is a much clearer and more interesting detail for a hook in my opinion. But this is just a suggestion for possible amendments to the hook, and it is not compulsory. If the nominator prefers to keep the current hook, that is perfectly fine with me as well. —Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 14:39, 14 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • Hi Prince of Erebor. That tidbit is mentioned in several of the sources. However, given that they are all state media, and their likelihood of being non-neutral in detailing Chiang Kai-shek, I'm a bit iffy reporting it as objective fact (I think at least one mentions that he basically threw the phone in response). I can add a few lines making it clear that this comes from a state source, then we can do an ALT. Let me revisit the sources. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
ALT2 ... that Chiang Kai-shek was reported to have ordered the execution of Yang Pao'an (pictured) after the latter threw a phone against a wall?
ALT3 ... that Yang Pao'an (pictured) refused to forsake the Chinese Communist Party, reportedly even after a personal telephone call from generalissimo Chiang Kai-shek?
@Crisco 1492: Thanks for your swift reply and update! It is true that state media should not be taken at face value, but it appears that all the other sources cited in the Later years and death section, such as China Daily and The Paper, are also state-owned, leaving us with limited options. Perhaps we could consider ALT3, as it seems to address concerns about neutrality and skepticism regarding the details of the supposed private conversation between Chiang and Yang?
I think it is ready to go now!  Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 17:49, 14 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Wuhan trolleybus route 1

  • ... that Wuhan trolleybus route 1 (pictured) was described as "a specialty of Wuhan", and "visitors had to ride the route to appreciate the uniqueness of the city"?

Moved to mainspace by S5A-0043 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

S5A-0043Talk 04:25, 3 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

Overall:   Approving ALT0 and ALT3. ALT1 is interesting, but I think the hook might give the impression that the trolleybus was continually circling around the statue, when in fact it was used only as a bus turnaround. ALT2 doesn't sound too interesting; this is a given if it was the first-ever trolleybus route in Wuhan. ALT4 might be too niche because it requires readers to actively make the association between electrification and communism. Epicgenius (talk) 23:21, 9 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 4

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Tonia Ko

Moved to mainspace by Miraclepine (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 57 past nominations.

ミラP@Miraclepine 17:10, 9 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   The sources used look self-published or at a minimum least defer editorial control to Tonia Ko on these pages. Uncertain if they meet the criteria of WP:RS or if because there are otherwise no issues with the article they are usable by WP:ABOUTSELF. I checked the major sources and didn't find anything that could be construed as close paraphrasing; besides the few things that couldn't easily be said any other way ("born in Hong Kong and raised in Honolulu"). I brought up issue with the provenance of sources but if this is not an issue please forgive me as I am very new to DYK. I have no other comments. Reconrabbit 19:19, 10 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Reconrabbit: As a frequent creator of academic biographies, I'm pretty sure the sources in question are reliable for basic facts (her own site included) and I don't think there are any ABOUTSELF issues, especially when the affiliated institutions are non-profits (especially the educational ones). Further, I added more secondary sources to be safe. ミラP@Miraclepine 18:05, 11 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Miraclepine: I wasn't aware of the nonprofit situation. Overall it looks like a fine hook and the basis for the statement isn't disputed. The addition of secondary sources is of course appreciated. I support this nomination. Reconrabbit 18:28, 11 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 6

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KGWD

5x expanded by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 713 past nominations.

Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 04:51, 6 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   new enough, long enough, no copyvio issues. It took me a second to figure out what the hook was trying to say but it's not inaccurate in any way. Interesting (to me at least), supported by source. Good to go. PARAKANYAA (talk) 01:39, 11 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 7

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Teleke Lauti

  • ... that politician Teleke Lauti unseated a former Prime Minister with a campaign managed by a former Prime Minister?
  • ALT1: ... that politician Teleke Lauti unseated a former Prime Minister, was unseated himself by a future Prime Minister, and later ran again to replace a former Prime Minister? Source: same for 'unseated a former Prime Minister'; lost to Latasi and Kausea Natano (future PM) in 2002 (could add another source verifying Natano as being a future PM if needed); Fenui News for running to replace a former PM (Latasi in 2018)
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Edward J. York
  • Comment: Open to other ways of wording. Would like it if it could be featured by the end of the month, prior to the end of the Wikipedia:2024 Developing Countries WikiContest (since I'm competing with the Tuvalu flag).

Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 246 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:02, 10 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough, long enough, QPQ done. We're treading around describing the political system slightly, but it can be pieced together. A source is needed in the article for the future PM part. Work on climate change should be mentioned in the lead. He may have been assistant Minsiter(?) but that may all need a deeper investigation. CMD (talk) 07:15, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • @Chipmunkdavis: I added a source for the future PM and expanded the lead a little to mention climate change. As for assistant minister, that source does seem to say that but then there are also several sources referring to him as "Teleke Lauti, Minister for the Environment" (including another UN publication) – he's so obscure, its hard to tell. I'm leaning towards keeping 'Minister for the Environment' though as there seems to be more sources saying that than 'Assistant Minister for the Environment'. Is that everything? BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 8

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Spearfishing at the Micronesian Games

Created by Sahaib (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 33 past nominations.

Sahaib (talk) 18:52, 8 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  Full review needed.--Launchballer 19:25, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Article is new enough and long enough, with detailed sources. Text is neutral and plagiarism free. Hook is cited and interesting, ALT1 preferred. QPQ is done. I hesitate to give it a green light as there are a couple of parts of the article that would benefit from some clarification - marked with when and why. Once they are sorted, good to go. Lajmmoore (talk) 18:09, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Uzun-Hajji, Najmuddin of Gotzo

Najmuddin of Gotzo and Uzun-Hajji

Created by Mupper-san (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Mupper-san (talk) 09:50, 8 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Length of both articles ok. Date perhaps such have bee 6 Sep, but ok. No close paraphrase found. Image free on Commons. I prefer the original hook, but don't see sentences in article (directly referenced) clearly stating the fact. The articles need some editing, sentence such as "He died shortly after, and the" appears incomplete. Also, is the Arabic script names correct? I know nothing about Arabic script use in North Caucasus, but نازمودن is not Najmuddin in Arabic. --Soman (talk) 14:10, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • @Soman:, I'm not quite sure if it would be written with the same letters as Arabic or if it would be written in the same style as Cyrillic/Latin-script forms of Avar. I wouldn't have any bias towards changing the spelling of Najmuddin in Arabic-script Avar to the Arabic form. The problem of an incomplete sentence has been fixed, as was a spelling error in the body. Mupper-san (talk) 21:18, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
      •   Well, I learnt something new today. Usually non-Arabic languages retain Arabic spellings of Islamic names when using Arabic scripts. But I now understand that the spellings in Avar with Arabic differ from Arabic (I note the spelling of Rasul here for example). I also now find the hook fact in each other articles, --Soman (talk) 22:45, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 9

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Funnyback

  • ... that people referred to the 1928 US$1 silver certificate as a Funnyback (pictured)?

Moved to mainspace by Bruxton (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 154 past nominations.

Bruxton (talk) 21:59, 10 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

Overall:   Article is new enough, long enough, well sourced and neutral. Earwig picks up some links, but these are quotations, so it's copy vio free. Hooks are cited and interesting. I prefer ALT0 and ALT3. Pic is free, used and clear. QPQ is done. All good. Lajmmoore (talk) 08:36, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Catharina Weiss

Created by Hawkeye7 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 432 past nominations.

Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:22, 9 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  Full review needed. You are welcome to take up the otiosity of that rule at WT:DYK in the interim.--Launchballer 18:32, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi Hawkeye7, review follows: article created 4 September (and nominated 5 days later) and exceeds minimum length; article is cited inline throughout with two exceptions: that her current team is "RSV Lahn-Dill" and that her disability class is "1.0" (both mentioned in the infobox and the disability class in the lead only); please can you cite these? The English language sources look to be reliable for the content cited, happy to AGF on the foreign language ones; I didn't pick up on any issue with overly close paraphrasing; image is good and properly licensed; hook is fine and loosk to check out to the German-language source (a Google search appears to confirm the team is referred to simply as "Rolling Chocolate" elsewhere); a QPQ has been carried out. If you can address the two minor citations needed this should be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 17:44, 25 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Added a bit more to cover this. She has left RSV Lahn-Dill but I have let this stand as she is yet to join a new club. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:04, 25 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 06:16, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Engelbrecht !Nawatiseb

  • Source: "Former Deputy Minister of Information and Communication Technology Engel Nawatiseb has parted ways with the Landless People’s Movement (LPM) after joining the party a mere month ago." -[4]
  • ALT1: ... that Engel Nawatiseb left the Landless People's Movement due to disagreements about who should drive during the party's fifth anniversary celebration? Source: "The source further claimed that these party members felt threatened by Nawatiseb’s position in the party. “People felt why is it only Nawatiseb driving the car and not them?” the source said. Following the complaints, the party allegedly took the car from Nawatiseb.", and "Another party source said Nawatiseb was insulted by a powerful young leader in the party about the usage of the car. “Apparently he wasn’t sharing the car with others. But once a car is assigned to you, it’s difficult to share, because once it is broken it becomes your responsibility,” another party source said. The source said the car was taken away a day after the party’s fifth anniversary. “On Sunday morning when they took the car, they embarrassed and insulted the man,” the source said." [5]
  • Reviewed:

Created by Samoht27 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

-Samoht27 (talk) 23:04, 11 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • I may review this nomination later today, but a quick comment is that while the source goes into detail about why !Nawatiseb was chosen to drive the car, why other party leaders were supposedly upset, and ostensible explanations as to why the car was reassigned, the article itself only talks about !Nawatiseb's embarrassment over the car being taken. I really like the second hook, but the disagreements should be detailed (or at least mentioned explicitly) in the article for the nomination to pass. Yue🌙 17:05, 12 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Also, I think it should be "a celebration of the party's fifth anniversary", because to my understanding he was to drive for the celebration in a specific part of Namibia, as he was the only person qualified in that area. Yue🌙 17:09, 12 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   References were spot-checked for verification; no issues arose. Both hooks are verified, but I prefer ALT1. However, I propose to the promoter this rewording of ALT1, which incorporates ALT0:

ALT2: ... that Engel Nawatiseb reportedly left the Landless People's Movement just a month after joining because of disagreements over who should drive during the party's fifth anniversary celebration?

The sources are the two already given. Yue🌙 20:13, 12 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Sorry to butt in, but the article isn't good enough for DYK. At first, I intended to remove the stub tag (we don't run stubs at DYK) but it's arguably still a stub. There is nothing outside of his political career; no early life, education, or what he did before politics. The article therefore fails WP:DYKCOMPLETE. Secondly, the date and place of birth are both unreferenced and that's a violation of WP:BLP. Thirdly, about half the article deals with controversies and that feels unbalanced; hence it fails WP:NPOV. There's a lot more work required to get this ready. I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news. Schwede66 08:17, 23 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Memento dollar

  • Source: Kann, Eduard (1953). Illustrated Catalog of Chinese Coins (Gold, Silver, Nickel & Aluminum). pp. 188-189

Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 79 past nominations.

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:40, 9 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Long enough, new enough. Well written and seems compliant with policy. My only worry is that the Kann book this is sourced to is self published, but from searching he was an established subject matter expert who sees use by others, so I think it's fine. I cannot find a copy of the book but I will AGF. Good to go. Image is good. PARAKANYAA (talk) 23:28, 10 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 10

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Abdur Rahman Mahmudi

  • ... that imprisoned Afghan politician Abdur Rahman Mahmudi (pictured) would write poems using onion juice as ink in his jail cell?
  • Source: Louis Dupree. Red Flag Over Hindu Kush: Leftist movements in Afghanistan. AUFS, 1979. p. 17

Moved to mainspace by Soman (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 399 past nominations.

Soman (talk) 10:51, 10 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  Continuing the review: the article is new enough and long enough at the time of the nomination, and no close paraphrasing was detected. A QPQ has been done, and the provided hook is interesting and cited inline. Given that I do not have access to the hook fact, I am assuming good faith here. This is almost ready to go: I would just like to see the relevant excerpt here be provided for verification purposes; the tick will be given once that's done. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:28, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
"Dr. Abdur Rahman MAHMUDI. Born 1909. [...] Beaten in prison, kidneys virtually destroyed. Wrote poems in prison using onion juice as ink" --Soman (talk) 21:47, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  That should work. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:01, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

KAUT-TV

Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 714 past nominations.

Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 08:32, 10 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Pituamkek National Park Reserve

  • Reviewed: ...Well, Better Than the Alternative
  • Comment: PEIsquirrel is my alt. I don't know why the template is saying 0 past nominations (maybe I used my alt? I have 5 according to my user page) but QPQ should be required. I'll take care of that shortly.

Moved to mainspace by Ivanvector (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 19:42, 11 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

QPQ:   - Not done
Overall:   New enough, long enough, sourced and neutral, Earwig detects no copyvio issues other than long names and quoted passages, the hook is interesting. I am awaiting the QPQ as mentioned by the nominator. Ivanvector I want to clarify with you the value of "4,000 years" mentioned in the hook. I see a value of 3000 years as mentioned by "suggest the possible presence of a drowned site dating within the Woodland Period (which spans from about 3000 years ago to the recent historic period)." but I'm not sure whether the "to the recent historic period" is inclusive of an additional thousand years or not, I am not familiar with the terminology enough to make my own determination. Ornithoptera (talk) 21:44, 11 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Ivanvector: Note that per a recent rule change, a QPQ should have been provided at the time of the nomination. Please provide one as soon as possible, as the nomination may be closed without further warning unless a QPQ is given. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:45, 18 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Narutolovehinata5: thanks, I was not aware of that. If we're going to be bureaucratic about things, the rules also suggest that previously completed QPQs can be credited towards a future nomination requiring one, and I have done QPQs with three or four of my past five nominations when none were required. Nonetheless, I have started to review ...Well, Better Than the Alternative. I will check on the sourcing for the time period this evening, and update accordingly. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 17:11, 18 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Ornithoptera: the source for 4,000 years is "First Look at the Proposed Pituamkek National Park Reserve" in National Parks Explorer, reference #6 in the article, which reads "These shores and forests have been home to the Mi’kmaq people for more than 4,000 years [...] ." I've added an additional inline citation. I interpreted "the recent historic period" as meaning the time period right up to European contact and the Acadian expulsion in the 18th century, and the section you're referring to I believe describes the estimated age of that particular drowned site or to the Pitawelkek site described in the source, not to the whole island chain. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 19:07, 18 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
To clarify the rule, it just means that a QPQ should have been provided at the time of making the nomination, if it is a review that was done previously. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:03, 18 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Thank you for getting back to me with the QPQ. I can verify that the new source for 4000 years explicitly mentions the date mentioned in the hook. For future reference, it might be ideal to not assume "the recent historic period" based on what you might assume, rather, finding a source that can attest to it within a relevant source is the safest way to go. The phrase can be interpreted in a variety of ways and would not serve as a strong source for this context. Thank you for your time Ivanvector, wonderful work on the article regardless. Ornithoptera (talk) 21:20, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hugh Bunel

  • Source: "Hugh Bunel, who murdered Mabel of Bellême, found himself pursued for years. Orderic tells us that Hugh fled first to Apulia, then to Sicily, and from there to the service of the Byzantine emperor Alexios Comnenos. But wherever Hugh went he was pursued by the threats and bribes of King William and Mabel's sons, who 'promised rewards and gifts to any spies who could kill the exiled assassin in whatever land they might find him', And so Hugh left Christendom altogether and lived among the Saracens for twenty years until, during the First Crusade, he appeared before Robert Curthose at the siege of Jerusalem and offered him his help and service in counsel and battle." from: Hagger, Mark S. (2017). Norman Rule in Normandy, 911-1144. Boydell & Brewer. p. 450. ISBN 978-1-78327-214-3.

Created by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 876 past nominations.

Dumelow (talk) 07:01, 10 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough, long enough, QPQ done. Can't access the relevant part of the hook source, but items sourced to Ordericus 1854 check out and have been very well rearranged throughout the article. I would just like to check where the certainty in the hook comes from, as the cited quote from the source (thanks a lot for that) reports it with some hesitation. CMD (talk) 08:58, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi CMD, I chose the quote above as it tells the story in one easy citable passage. I think Haggard is just making clear his source; other publications I have cited in the article state it more directly. Eg: "Hugh Bunel, who was exiled from Normandy after hacking off the head of Mabel of Bellême as she lay in bed, lived for twenty years among the Saracens, studying their customs and language: as a result he was able to offer useful services to the armies of the First Crusade." from: Fletcher, Richard A. (1991). The Quest for El Cid. Oxford University Press. p. 109. ISBN 978-0-19-506955-6. - Dumelow (talk) 11:03, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Thanks for adding further, good to go. CMD (talk) 15:45, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Devil's Doorway (Wisconsin)

Moved to mainspace by Lightburst (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 25 past nominations.

Lightburst (talk) 01:39, 11 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Hi Lightburst, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 10 September and exceeds minimum length; I am not familiar with the sources used but they appear to be reliable enough for the content; I didn't find any issue with overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck on some of the sources; image source is no longer online but is a bot upload from a free image repository so ought to be fine; hooks mentioned in article and checkout to source cited, I prefer the simplicity of ALT0; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me - Dumelow (talk) 14:43, 11 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Rjjiii: Thanks for catching that error. I removed the 1898 date. I preferred this picture to the 1898 image in the article as this one looks a bit more ominous. Lightburst (talk) 16:22, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 11

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Ernest de Munck

Created by AsYouWish13 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

AsYouWish13 02:26, 15 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Long enough. New enough. Inline citations throughout. Eight of the 15 sources are behind Proquest, so AGF here. Other sources do check out. Generally well written; I did make a few minor copy-edits. Copyright "violation unlikely" (9.1% similarity) per Earwig. Both hooks are cited. I find ALT1 more interesting; plus, it references directly to the very Stradivarius cello once owned by the man. GTG for ALT1.

Pabhāvatī

Created by Hteiktinhein (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Hteiktinhein (talk) 11:45, 11 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   The article is new enough and long enough, no QPQ is needed. The article seems mostly sourced to the primary source, but having a quick search I am satisfied the subject has further coverage. While the source given in this nomination is non-English and without a page number, the hook is sourced in the article to the primary source which does support it. The article would be improved by the use of page numbers for sources. I am unsure about the image copyright, I do not think it can be own work as it is a photograph of an artwork. CMD (talk) 09:25, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • @Chipmunkdavis:, Thank you for reviewing my first DYK submission. The 'ancient-buddhist-texts' English source is a primary source, but I added it mainly for clarity and better understanding in English. The article is fully supported by the Burmese source, and even without the 'ancient-buddhist-texts' reference, it remains comprehensive. The Burmese source, Kutha Zatdaw (PDF), Myanmar Alin (in Burmese), 16 June 2005, p. 10, is sufficient to cover the entire article. An article from the Myanmar Academy of Arts and Science is also an additional reference that can be used to verify the entire content of the article. If you're unable to verify the Burmese source, please feel free to seek assistance from other Burmese-speaking editors. And I added more English source and page numbers.
Regarding the image, the Buddhist temple artwork is not copyrighted, which is a common case in Myanmar. Buddhist Jataka tales are often depicted in many temples and monasteries across Myanmar. For instance, File:071 The Defeat of Alavaka (9022063790).jpg is an example. In Myanmar and Thailand, temple arts of Buddha cosmology are generally not subject to copyright. Thanks! Hteiktinhein (talk) 20:06, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
No problem, it is an interesting article. On the sources, there is no specific issue with non-English sources (although the English backup is appreciated), but as a general point I would suggest including page numbers next to specific claims for all languages. Would you have a link for more information about that copyright situation? CMD (talk) 14:53, 19 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
As I’m not an expert on copyright, I’m not sure how to explain it very well. I do know that Myanmar is not a freedom of panorama country, but the Aung Myin Dipa Temple in Patheingyi was established around 1880 by Min Dipa, a minister and court official in King Thibaw's court. The paintings in the temple seem old, but there is no indication of the year they were made or the owner’s name. So, they could be considered under the PD-Myanmar license. However, I don’t want to delay or cause any arguments, so it’s fine to promote my DYK without the photo. I’m withdrawing the photo for now. Pls kindly review. Thanks! Hteiktinhein (talk) 02:59, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Good to go. CMD (talk) 05:44, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 12

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The Taehongdang Party Secretary

Created by Chipmunkdavis (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 45 past nominations.

CMD (talk) 17:27, 12 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Hi CMD, review follows: article created 12 September and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout; I am not familiar with all of the sources and some are subscription only but appear to be reliable for the content cited; I didn't find any issue with overly close paraphrasing from the parts of the English-language sources I could access; hook facts are interesting, stated in the article and cited; I can't access the NK News articles but AGF they support the hooks, ALT1 looks to also be supported by the Yonhapnews article (according to Google Translate); a QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me - Dumelow (talk) 11:03, 22 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Passmore Edwards Centre

The Passmore Edwards Centre

  • Source: "the building was a gift to Newton Abbot from Passmore Edwards, a noted public benefactor, in memory of his mother." from: "Adult Education Centre and Library". National Heritage List for England. Historic England. Retrieved 10 September 2024.

Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 879 past nominations.

Dumelow (talk) 15:25, 12 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Created September 10, and 4,256 characters; new enough and long enough. The qpq is completed. The image is clear and free based on the FOP of the UK. Earrwig does not alert to any issues. AGF on the hook's source - thank you for providing a sentence from the book above. The hook is interesting and it looks like the subject provided nearly all of the money for the building so it is accurate. I made a few edits to the article for expediency. I did not change the spacing after periods (there are two). I think there should be one space after periods but based on MOS:DOUBLESPACE it does not affect what readers see. Bruxton (talk) 20:17, 13 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 13

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United States ten-thousand-dollar bill

  • ... that the US$10,000 bill (pictured) is the highest denomination of US currency to be used by the public?

Moved to mainspace by Bruxton (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 156 past nominations.

Bruxton (talk) 20:53, 13 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 14

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Grupo Mexicano de Desarrollo, S.A. v. Alliance Bond Fund, Inc.

Created by SilverLocust (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

SilverLocust 💬 05:30, 14 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough (draft), long enough, no QPQ needed. A couple of paragraphs lack citations, although they read as if they might simply use a duplicate of other existing citations. Earwig gives a high value, but this seems to be mostly quotations. If there is another way to word "converted the preliminary injunction into a permanent injunction" that may be useful, but if not, I have not found copyvio. The hook seems interesting from a common law perspective, but I am concerned the language does not easily track the article which may make it difficult for readers to find. For example, "freeze" does not appear in the article, neither does "Lord Chancellor". I do think it is in the sources given here, although I cannot access the source in the article. This should be a simple fix, either with tweaks to the article or the hook. CMD (talk) 10:48, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Chipmunkdavis:
    1. Added references for those few paragraphs I forgot to cite.
    2. To make it easier to find the support for the hook, I have rephrased the intro a bit, duplicated a footnote there from the body (optional per MOS:LEADCITE), and added non-paywalled sources for it. Additionally:
      • I have changed a "frozen" into "freeze" for sake of CTRL+F. (There were already 8 instances of "freezing".)
      • Likewise I have added "Lord Chancellor" to the lead, though "the Chancellor" and "the pre-Revolutionary Chancellor" appear in the article and refer to that. I used "Lord Chancellor" in the hook rather than "Court of Chancery" (the former court of the Lord Chancellor) mainly since it sounds more interesting (and is accurate), but I would be fine with instead using "Court of Chancery" in the hook.
      • Re: "although I cannot access the source", if you log in to the Wikipedia: Library, then you should be able to access that paywalled sources via HeinOnline at Maloy, "Expansive Equity Jurisprudence: A Court Divided" (and likewise the other paywalled source at Haines, "The Conservative Assault on Federal Equity").
    3. While I have now very slightly changed the wording, "converted the preliminary injunction into a permanent injunction" (Google) is not original to the case, and the exact phrase is used by the Supreme Court, the court of appeals, and multiple sources (Burbank, Grenig)—in each instance without quotation.
Thank you very much for looking over this. SilverLocust 💬 22:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Thanks for the replies and explanations, and the TWL note. I believe this is good to go. CMD (talk) 01:51, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Love Lies (2024 film)

  • ... that to help the production crew save on the budget, Sandra Ng wore her own clothes while filming Love Lies?

Created by Prince of Erebor (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 16 past nominations.

Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 15:10, 14 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Claiming this for review and hoping to finish the full review soon. For now I'll just note that the first hook is probably the best option here. It's mentioned in the article and properly referenced. I couldn't find where in the Chinese source the part about her using her own clothes is mentioned, but the English source confirmed it so there's that. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:14, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Hi Narutolovehinata5. First of all, I am confused, as I believed User:MaranoFan had approved this nomination yesterday, and your statement does not imply a denouncement of their review. So I am unsure why Marano's review was overridden. As for the Chinese source, it is actually written in Cantonese. It writes "'First of all, I would like to thank Sandra Ng for providing many of her own beautiful clothes. In fact, we are the real scam syndicate, as we first asked Ng to play this role but couldn’t advance her payment. Then we "made" Ng into lending us her costumes, and even she joked, "are you guys really that poor?"' Ho Miu Ki expressed gratitude for Ng's professionalism and kindness to help the production crew saving a significant amount on wardrobe expenses. (首先要多謝君如提供許多私伙靚衫。其實我們才是真正的詐騙集團,首先請君如演這個角色,但又未能預支片酬;然後再『氹』君如借出服裝,連她也笑言『你哋係咪真係咁窮呀!』」何妙祺感謝吳君如的專業與不計較,願意為劇組節省大量服飾上的開銷。) It does not mention Ng wearing her clothes, as it was cited to support the first part of the sentence about her "[lending] her own wardrobe to the costume crew" and "to help to save money". It is unrelated to the hook, which is why I did not include that source in this nomination. But as you mentioned, the English source has already checked out the hook, so I am still uncertain about what the problem is here. —Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 15:50, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Narutolovehinata5 Do not delete other users' comments like you did here.--NØ 17:07, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@MaranoFan and Prince of Erebor: I'm really sorry about the last edit! I recently had the "save discarded edits" preference enabled and I had the editing tab open for a while since I was planning to review this. It seems that the new edits were not detected by the tool after refreshing and instead reverted to an earlier version of the article, hence why my edit overrode the review and I didn't know or notice that a review had already been done. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:40, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ahhh thanks for clarifying, Narutolovehinata5! It is fine. I was just a bit confused, because I remember the nomination being approved, but that comment suddenly disappeared and it was undergoing review again. Thought I might be delusional or something. XD —Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 07:36, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Putting the tick here just to make it clear that MaranoFan already reviewed/approved this, and I've struck my "review". Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 21:38, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ Hsia, Heidi (22 April 2024). "Sandra Ng wears her own clothes for "Love Lies"". Yahoo! Life. Archived from the original on 18 May 2024. Retrieved 13 September 2024.
  2. ^ Kwong, Lenka (6 June 2023). "「Threads」社交應用程式熱潮來襲!到底一眾名人的首個帖子內容是甚麼?" [The Threads social media app craze is here! What exactly is the content of the first posts from these celebrities?]. Harper's Bazaar (in Chinese). Archived from the original on 13 September 2024. Retrieved 12 September 2024.

Elias Karmon

Created by RoySmith (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 41 past nominations.

RoySmith (talk) 19:43, 14 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Moved to draftspace on DYK day and size is 3979 B. Since we're almost done, @RoySmith: fix that one issue and I'll approve. Gotta admit that hook was interesting. ミラP@Miraclepine 18:47, 15 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Miraclepine thank you for the review; I've done some rewording. RoySmith (talk) 19:07, 15 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@RoySmith: Okay we're good to go.   ALT0 approved. ミラP@Miraclepine 19:11, 15 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 15

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June Franklin

  • Source: "In recognition of her demonstrated leadership skills, she was elected during the 63rd General Assembly to the position of Assistant Minority Leader of the Democratic House. Franklin is the first African-American to hold such a leadership position in either major political party in Iowa." - Silag, Bill (2001). Outside In: African-American History In Iowa 1838-2000. State Historical Society of Iowa. pp. 349–350. ISBN 0890330131.

Created by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 417 past nominations.

SL93 (talk) 00:29, 17 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • Not a huge fan of the hook angle given that being an assistant minority leader doesn't seem as impressive being an actual minority leader. There do seem to be some other possible alternatives in the article so here they are:
ALT1 ... that Iowa politician June Franklin worked as an insurance agent and a real estate agent prior to entering politics?
ALT1a ... that Iowa state representative June Franklin worked as an insurance agent and a real estate agent prior to entering politics?
ALT2 ... that Iowa politician June Franklin wrote to 10 members of the US Congress urging them to declare Martin Luther King Jr.'s birthday a federal holiday?
ALT3 ... that state representative June Franklin addressed the nation from the Iowa State Capitol following the assassination of Martin Luther King Jr.?
Most partial to ALT1/ALT1a myself but I'll leave it to a reviewer. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:24, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Narutolovehinata5 I agree that those are much better. Thank you. SL93 (talk) 00:32, 19 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 00:18, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Nomination two days after creation. Size 2487 B. AGF offline source for ALT0, 1, and 1a. Prefer ALT2 over ALT3 over the others. ミラP@Miraclepine 00:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Brussels Party Conference of the Communist Party of Germany

  • Source: Hans Kluth. Die KPD in der Bundesrepublik: Ihre politische Tätigkeit und Organisation 1945 – 1956. Springer-Verlag, 2013. pp. 12, 15

Moved to mainspace by Soman (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 400 past nominations.

Soman (talk) 11:19, 15 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • I will gladly review this article today! WatkynBassett (talk) 08:58, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • The article was moved to mainspace on 15 September 2024‎ and nominated on the same day. It is thus eligible.
  • The article is well-sourced. I did some spot checks and the references checked out. I would have loved to see Sfn-References. If you plan to bring this article to GA, I would suggest using them (I would offer myself to review this GA-nomination)
  • The article is written in a neutral and non-promotional tone. However, I inserted some quotation-marks to highlight particular Communist-vocabulary.
  • Earwig did not pick up anything.
  • QPQ done.
  • Hook review: I really liked and enjoyed the hook! I thought I had a passable knowledge of that era but never heard of the KPD using "code locations" in the 1930s. For the promoter: I accessed the German-language source provided via Wikipedia Library and it checked out.

WatkynBassett (talk) 05:42, 20 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

GhGk-63

  • Source: Desrosiers, Pierre M.; Gendron, Daniel (2004). "The GhGk-63 Site: A Dorset Occupation in Southeastern Hudson Bay, Nunavik". Canadian Journal of Archaeology. 28 (1). page 76

Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 80 past nominations.

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:10, 15 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 16

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Ava–Hanthawaddy War (1401–1403)

  • Source: Chronicle source: Hmannan Yazawin Vol. 1 2003, page 455.

Academic source: Michael Aung-Thwin 2007, page 256

Improved to Good Article status by Hybernator (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 114 past nominations.

Hybernator (talk) 22:58, 23 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Verna Mersereau

  • ... that American stage actress Verna Mersereau performed her traditional classical dances before royalty in Calcutta?

SilverserenC 01:49, 18 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough (moved draft), long enough. No copyvio from spotcheck of the first 3 sources. Very nice work with the newspapers. On prose, just a double check on whether we should be writing "Europe and the Orient", it feels outdated. Perhaps it should be in quotes, as I am unsure modern readers will understand what "the Orient" means. In Career, I am unclear how she joined a company in 1928 if she had already travelled with them in 1927.For the hook, I am unsure where "ancient" comes from, it is not in the sources. I would also suggest wording it as "royalty in Calcutta", as I'm not sure Calcutta itself had specific royalty. Otherwise, it is interesting and sourced. CMD (talk) 13:48, 23 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Hi, Chipmunkdavis! I've fixed usage of "the Orient", per your suggestion. I only used the term because the papers in question did without technically defining what area that referred to. I've fixed the year discrepancy. I've changed the hook to "in".
As for ancient, I would love for alternative suggestions on that one. I included it for a particular reason. If it just says "classical dance", then people are going to assume that means ballet or ballroom dances, when that is absolutely not the type of dances being referred to. The dances she used were things like ancient Assyrian and Egyptian dances. However, the sources on her dancing before the Calcutta royalty didn't specify which dance types she used in that case, so I wasn't comfortable automatically including either of those two cultural names. SilverserenC 21:44, 23 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Interesting that the sources all seem to use classical dance, perhaps its meaning has shifted. After a quick look around, would something like "folk" or "traditional" work? The royalty wording should be tweaked in the article as well. CMD (talk) 00:56, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
I suppose traditional classical dances will work. I've made the change in the hook above and fixed the royalty sentences in the article. SilverserenC 01:07, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  We are good to go, in the hopes of one day getting a Wikipedia article on this meaning of classical dance. CMD (talk) 01:29, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 17

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School of the Arts, Singapore

  • Source: "FRENCH luxury label Louis Vuitton (LV) will be partnering the School of the Arts (Sota) to develop a visual arts programme for its students."

[6]

    • Reviewed:

Created by BenTanXiaoMing (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

BenTanXiaoMing (talk) 06:33, 20 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough, long enough. Article is well sourced (other than Regina Song's alumni info which I added one for you) and doesn't seem to have neutrality & copyvio concerns. Hook is interesting enough & AGF on source since it appears the article is only accessible at NLB libraries and I can't go to one in the near future. I also tweaked the hook to make it read more naturally (hopefully), though please do voice out if you disagree. QPQ not needed. Overall seems good to go to me. S5A-0043Talk 09:57, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 18

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Gerda Philipsborn

  • Reviewed:

Created by Raydann (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

❯❯❯ Raydann(Talk) 11:07, 25 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   The article was created by Raydann on September 18, 2024, 7 days before the nomination. It has 3720 characters (571 words). Acc to this, [7] only one descriptive phrase is same as the source material. Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 07:57, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Karađorđeva šnicla

Karađorđeva šnicla with fries, tartar sauce, and a slice of lemon

Improved to Good Article status by Vacant0 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

Vacant0 (talkcontribs) 12:31, 20 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Dusko Doder

  • Source: "Doder, who was known for his scoops, was reporting for The Post in February 1984 when he noticed hundreds of lights blazing at the Soviet Defense Ministry in Moscow. He surmised that the Soviet leader, Yuri Andropov, had died. United States officials, dismissing the suggestion, said that Mr. Doder was “smoking pot,” as he and Ms. Branson wrote in a 2021 memoir, “The Inconvenient Journalist.”

“Soviet television and radio Thursday night unexpectedly changed scheduled programs to classical music,” Mr. Doder’s dispatch read. “The unusual change came against the backdrop of the illness of Soviet leader Yuri Andropov.”"

NYTimes

Created by Thriley (talk) and ForsythiaJo (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 144 past nominations.

Thriley (talk) 21:34, 24 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough, long enough. No copyvio or OR found. QPQ is done. Appeared on the main page, but as an RD.Hook is interesting, and sourced in the article. Regarding alt hooks, I mean, what a life. Lots of possibilities in finding a friend to fund international travel, covering Tiananmen and the breakup of Yugoslavia, the classic UK libel suit. That said, I like the current one, no need to mess with a good thing. CMD (talk) 16:12, 25 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

ALT1 ... that journalist Dusko Doder announced the 1984 death of Yuri Andropov, the leader of the Soviet Union, a day before the Soviet government after noticing changes to the lighting at a government building and a sudden shift to classical music on radio and television? Thriley (talk) 17:57, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Chipmunkdavis: What do you think of this hook? It feels a bit more hooky. Thriley (talk) 17:58, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
With the changes that it Doder "reported" before the Soviet Union "announced" it would work, as he sent the info to his newspaper which published on the day of the Soviet announcement. CMD (talk) 03:21, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
ALT2 ... that Dusko Doder reported the 1984 death of Yuri Andropov, the leader of the Soviet Union, a day before the Soviet government announced it after he noticed changes to the lighting at a government building and a sudden shift to classical music on radio and television? Thriley (talk) 17:58, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Brian David Gilbert

  • Source: [8] for Stranger Things; [9] for ABBA; [10] for health insurance

Moved to mainspace by Vigilantcosmicpenguin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.

— Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧(talk | contribs) 16:48, 19 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   The hook is really interesting, good to go! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 08:04, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Ana Eva Hei

Profile view of Ana Eva Hei, 1911

Created by Lajmmoore (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 101 past nominations.

Lajmmoore (talk) 19:14, 18 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   The article is meeting the size requirement, was nominated in time, and the QPQ checks out. I don't think the image requires cropping. However, isn't the hook missing the word "surviving" for it to match what the source says, Lajmmoore? Something like "... that one of the last surviving women from Rapa Nui to receive traditional facial tattoos was queen consort Ana Eva Hei"? The article has the same issue.--NØ 11:17, 19 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Daughter's Daughter

  • ALT1: ... that the scenes set in the United States in the Taiwanese film Daughter's Daughter were almost written out but were retained at the insistence of lead actress Sylvia Chang? Source: [2]
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Milan A. P. Harminc
  • Comment: Before my rewrite, there was a large unsourced paragraph that should have been removed and arguably should not have counted toward the prose length. However, even if that paragraph were included, the original prose contained 1,011 characters (Special:Diff/1246034327), while the current article after my rewrite contains 6,201 characters. Therefore, it is 100% eligible for DYK.

Created by Prince of Erebor (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.

Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 15:45, 18 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:   - ALT0 is fine. However, both the source for ALT1 and your translation of that quote say that the scenes were almost not filmed in the US. The current wording of ALT1 makes it sound like the footage was shot and then almost omitted in post-production, which is something different.

Overall:   @Prince of Erebor: Nice work on this article. ALT0 is good to go, but if you want ALT1 instead, the wording of that hook should be clarified, as per my comments above. Honestly, I think ALT1 would be more interesting if you submit a revised hook. Epicgenius (talk) 21:21, 19 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi Epicgenius, thanks for your feedback! Perhaps I can change it to:
ALT2: "...that the scenes set in the United States in the Taiwanese film Daughter's Daughter were nearly omitted during the writing process but were retained at the insistence of lead actress Sylvia Chang?"
What do you think? —Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 14:01, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  @Prince of Erebor, thanks for the response. ALT0 and ALT2 are good to go. Epicgenius (talk) 14:08, 20 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ 羅子欣 (17 September 2024). "王淨「香菜梗」成國際笑點!《鬼才之道》《女兒的女兒》多倫多影展奪獎". TVBS News (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 September 2024. 而多倫多影展2015年設立站台單元,首度頒發「榮譽提及獎」給張艾嘉,史無前例。 [Since the Toronto International Film Festival established the Platform section in 2015, for the first time, Sylvia Chang was awarded with an "Honorable Mention", which is unprecedented.]
  2. ^ Chien, Ying-jou (9 May 2024). "侯孝賢監製新片、張艾嘉向導演申訴:讓我站在紐約街頭一秒鐘!|金馬前進坎城". Yahoo! News (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 September 2024. 《女兒的女兒》導演黃熙坦言,當初拍戲怕沒錢,劇本改過很多個版本,就是為了要在台北拍,不去美國。「張姐聽到以後跟我說:『開什麼玩笑?你好歹要給我站在紐約街頭一秒鐘吧?』」後來劇組真的拉到紐約出外景。 [Director Huang Xi of Daughter's Daughter admitted that he was initially worried about production costs and revised the script multiple times to set the shoot in Taipei instead of the United States. "Sylvia Chang heard this and said to me, 'Are you kidding? At the very least, you need to let me stand on the streets of New York for a second?'" Eventually, the crew really did go to New York for location shooting.]

Gao Qifeng

  • ALT1: ... that the painter Gao Qifeng (pictured) was reported to have fled China after accusing Provisional President Yuan Shikai of assassinating a nationalist leader? Source: Cai Dengshan (蔡登山) (25 August 2023). "番禺高奇峰:未尽其才的"岭南三杰" [Panyu Gao Qifeng: The "Three Heroes of Lingnan" Who Did Not Use His Talents to Their Fullest]. Dute News (in Chinese). Shenzhen Media Group. Archived from the original on 17 September 2024. Retrieved 17 September 2024. (quote: 一九一三年,宋教仁在上海被袁世凯遣刺客刺杀于火车站,高奇峰因与谢英伯、马小进为文,揭宋教仁案血迹秘密,为袁世凯下令通缉,于是出亡日本,研究制版学。 [In 1913, Song Jiaoren was assassinated at the Shanghai train station by assassins sent by Yuan Shikai. Gao Qifeng, together with Xie Yingbo and Ma Xiaojin, wrote an article to reveal the bloody secret of Song Jiaoren's case, and Yuan Shikai put them on a wanted list. Gao then went into exile in Japan to study printmaking.]
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Poll (parrot)

Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 680 past nominations.

 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:47, 18 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Both the hooks are really good on interestingness. The article is well-done with no copyright issues and meets the size requirements. This was nominated in a timely manner and the QPQ has been completed. Hopefully it can appear with the image as it is high quality.--NØ 11:11, 19 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 19

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Deutscher Kurzwellensender Atlantik

  • Source: "In March 1943, the Political Warfare Executive at Woburn Abbey began broadcasting from two radio stations, Deutscher Kurzwellensender Atlantik and Soldatenseder Calais. These purported to be authentic German transmitters, but in fact had been developed to undermine German morale, and in particular to target U-boat crews ... The objective was to subvert the discipline of enemy submariners by providing continuous first-class music, news, and feature programs every night between 1830 and 0800. Interspersed with German dance bands and singers recorded in the United States, Atlantik spread rumors, issued depressing news bulletins, and generally sought to destroy the seamen's faith in their leadership by contradicting what they had heard from Germany on official channels." from: West, Nigel (2010). Historical Dictionary of Naval Intelligence. Rowman & Littlefield. pp. 90–91. ISBN 978-0-8108-6760-4.

Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 880 past nominations.

Dumelow (talk) 13:26, 19 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • @Dumelow: Another interesting article and perfect for DYK. I prefer ALT0 as interesting and confirmed with citation in the article based on the pull out detailed under the hook. I suggest adding the dates that this station operated in the lead. It was nominated seven days after creation so it is new enough and at 6371 characters it is long enough. The QPQ is done and Earwig does not find evidence of plagiarism. We could use some attention on a few minor things prior to approval.
  1. I suggest adding the dates that this station was operating somewhere in the lead and body.
  2. MOS:AMPM I think it should be: 6 am 8 am, and should the word broadcast be broadcasted? Here is the sentence: "It broadcast between 6pm and 8am daily on a number of shortwave channels".
  3. Maybe other words for the phrase "to this end" as it feels conversational and is an informal idiom. Here is the sentence: "To this end some of the staff were German defectors, including Otto John, Richard Wurmann". Maybe "In order to achieve this goal" or something similar.
  4. Sentence in the article: "To make the station attractive to listeners it broadcast the latest in popular dance music" Same question about the word broadcast
  5. Sentence "it might involve an attempt for vessels to break out to the far east" should Far East be capitalized? and linked to Far East. I cannot access the source so not sure if it is the same thing.
Bruxton (talk) 20:15, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi Bruxton, thanks for the review. I have made the edits you've suggested. I held off on the "broadcast" ones as Arjayay picked up on one already ("broadcasted" -> "broadcast"). I don't do much in the radio sphere so will defer to them (and perhaps Sammi Brie as the resident DYK radio expert might assist?). Thanks - Dumelow (talk) 21:09, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
"Broadcast" as a past-tense verb is perfectly fine and preferred to "broadcasted". Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 21:27, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  @Dumelow: Thank you for the quick action. And @Sammi Brie: thank you for looking, I was unsure. Bruxton (talk) 21:43, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Pat Ragusa, Alan Pringle

5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. Nominator has 248 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:10, 26 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Two QPQs done. Pat Ragusa starting expansion seven days before nomination. No OR or copyvio issues found in use of Gelberg source (although perhaps it doesn't need so many repeat citations). Article is otherwise presentable. Alan Pringle similarly expanded within the week timeframe. Can't access the newspaper sources here, but checked the stats ones and they same in order.Hook source is Pro Football Reference, who at a quick look around reliable for simple data. The data at any rate aligns with the prose in the articles. This seems good to go. CMD (talk) 06:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

45 East 66th Street

Created by Epicgenius (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 676 past nominations.

Epicgenius (talk) 21:10, 19 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 20

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Samuel Conrad Schwach

Created by Sebbog13 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Sebbog13 (talk) 21:44, 20 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   New and just long enough. No QPQ required. Looks good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 21

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The True Record

  • ALT1: ... that the ideas of aesthetic education conveyed by the The True Record (pictured) may have informed the May Fourth Movement? Source: Pan Yaochang (潘耀昌) Xu Li (徐立) (2011). "上海早期都市文艺先锋 ———《真相画报》" [Shanghai's Early Urban Art Pioneer - "The True Record"] (PDF). Journal of Shanghai University (in Chinese): 131–140. (Quote: 画报所设想的通过探索都市新美术,倡导中西融合以提升中华民族文化内涵的举措,从某种角度而言,为五四运动时期倡导“美育”思想做了铺垫。The pictorial's idea of ​​exploring new urban art and advocating the integration of Chinese and Western cultures to enhance the cultural connotation of the Chinese nation, in a sense, paved the way for the advocacy of "aesthetic education" during the May Fourth Movement.)
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Punam Krishan

Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 681 past nominations.

 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:30, 21 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 22

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Francis W. Kelly

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Moved to mainspace by Darth Stabro (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 05:02, 23 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Hi Darth Stabro, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 23 September and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout; I don't have access to all of the sources but they look to be reliable and I didn't find any issues with overly close paraphrasing on a spotcheck of ones I could access; for the image do you have any evidence it was taken by a serving US military person, other than the setting of it? Its immediate source is a US newspaper. Hook is interesting but the nickname is only mentioned in the lead and that it was awarded for "his insistence on being on the front lines" isn't mentioned.
@Dumelow: I'll get confirmation from the PA Veterans Museum that it is a USMC image but all evidence suggests it being an official portrait. I've placed and sourced more into on the nickname.~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 15:23, 23 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks, give me a ping when you hear back and I'll pop back to complete the review. As you say the photo is almost certainly taken for official purposes but good to have confirmation - Dumelow (talk) 15:26, 23 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Howdy @Dumelow:, I've just got off the phone with the PA Veterans Museum where the Inquirer got the photo from and they confirmed that the photo is an official military photo and in the public domain. ~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 18:23, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks Darth Stabro, image looks good. My only hang up is on the "because of his insistence on being on the front lines" bit of the hook. I don't think this is explicitly stated in the article. We have "Kelly's time as a chaplain was marked by an insistence on being on the front lines" and "The Marines of his division became so accustomed to seeing him that they nicknamed him "Father Foxhole" or "Foxhole Kelly"" but the two aren't linked directly. I'm happy to approve both hooks without the "insistence" part or perhaps you can suggest something? - Dumelow (talk) 09:25, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yeah, that makes sense Dumelow. How about was known as "Father Foxhole" for his consistent presence on the front lines? (I have no preference on which hook, whichever you think is best) ~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 17:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Approving ALT2 and ALT3 above. I don't yet have newspapers.com access but happy to AGF that the source supports the statement in the article " The Marines of his division became so accustomed to seeing him that they nicknamed him 'Father Foxhole'"; seems to be corroborated elsewhere anyway - Dumelow (talk) 20:01, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Malaysia Monument

The Malaysia Monument in Kota Kinabalu

Created by Chipmunkdavis (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 46 past nominations.

CMD (talk) 06:36, 22 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • Review
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Overall:   A picture of the monument would help and it's not clear why one of the article's pictures has not been nominated. Andrew🐉(talk) 09:12, 22 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • A good question, to which the answer is that I did not think about that at all. I quite like the infobox image, which captured the monument with the state and national flags around it. If others disagree, I can try to find another. CMD (talk) 10:18, 22 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 24

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Noken system

Created by Chipmunkdavis (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 48 past nominations.

CMD (talk) 20:45, 24 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Overall:   I was wondering when this would be an article! Great work on it. New enough, long enough, sourced, neutral, plagiarism free. Hooks are cited and interesting. QPQ is complete. Per your invitation, I would like to suggest the following hook for consideration:

Battle of Axspoele

Clito as depicted on his seal

  • Source: "in the west battle was uncommon and mass cavalry charges were rate ... only at Axspoele on 21 June 1128 was there anything resembling a mass cavalry charge and here numbers were small" from: France, John (15 May 2017). Medieval Warfare 1000–1300. Routledge. p. 60. ISBN 978-1-351-91847-3.

Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 884 past nominations.

Dumelow (talk) 18:17, 24 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  Article is new enough and long enough; more than 5x longer than short START article (under a different title) that it replaced; appears to have adequate references though they cannot be read on-line so sources are taken in good faith; both hook facts have in-line citations; hooks are both appropriate length; I think the first hook is better than ALT1, but either could be used; image is in Public Domain.Orygun (talk) 05:54, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

How You Get the Girl

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Converted from a redirect by Brachy0008 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

brachy08 (chat here lol) 09:37, 24 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

Overall:   Article is well balanced, sourced and written from a neutral point of view. It is new enough, as it has been moved from draftspace within the last 7 days and the earwig tool found no signs of copyright violation or plagiarism. The hooks are interesting enough and the sources provided are reliable. Well done, Wolverine XI (talk to me) 10:19, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

personally, i feel that the original hook is suitable (because of the image) also bc i have less than 5 dyk noms, qpq doesn't really apply to me (yet) brachy08 (chat here lol) 10:41, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
If that's the case, then you should probably remove the second hook. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 10:46, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

removed brachy08 (chat here lol) 11:14, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 25

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Dick Moss

  • Source: "Hired by union executive director Marvin Miller as general counsel in 1967, Moss argued the 1975 case involving pitchers Andy Messersmith and Dave McNally that led to arbitrator Peter Seitz striking down the reserve clause. That provision for a unilateral one-year renewal had been included in every contract since 1878 and had enabled teams to control players by maintaining those agreements could be extended perpetually. Seitz decided on Dec. 23, 1975, the clause meant only a single one-year renewal. The decision impacted all sports across North America and led to collectively bargained free agency in baseball."

CBS News

Created by Thriley (talk) and Ungathering (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 146 past nominations.

Thriley (talk) 19:52, 2 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Overall:   Article looks good. QPQ done. Appears good to go (hook probably could be condensed a bit though if wanted, e.g. ... that labor lawyer Dick Moss argued the 1975 case which resulted in the establishment of free agency in Major League Baseball? – not required though) BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:01, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you. I think the shorter hook works better. Thriley (talk) 21:45, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Adele de Dombasle

Pōmare IV by Adele de Dombasle

  • ... that French divorcee Adèle de Dombasle travelled to Polynesia in 1847 working as an illustrator, drawing people such as Queen Pōmare IV (pictured)? Source: "Adèle de Dombasle managed to produce several tens of drawings during her travels in Polynesia (and Chile). These represent monuments and sites from the Marquesas, Tahitian and Marquesan inhabitants with elements of material culture, landscapes and portraits—including from historical figures such as Queen Pomaré." & "In 1848, a young French divorcée11 who had sailed across two oceans, from Bordeaux to the Marquesas Islands" in https://archaeologybulletin.org/articles/10.5334/bha-656

5x expanded by Lajmmoore (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 102 past nominations.

Lajmmoore (talk) 18:19, 26 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • An interesting article, I will review shortly. TSventon (talk) 19:05, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  •   @Lajmmoore:, The article is well written (and no longer an orphan). It is clearly 5x expanded, new enough and long enough. No POV problems and no obvious copyvio via Earwig. Images are from 1847 so no copyright problems.
  • QPQ has been completed.
  • The hook is intriguing, but could you double check that the hook facts are in the article with references following immediately. I couldn't find "divorcee", "travelled to Polynesia in 1847" is OK, "working as an illustrator" and "drawing people such as Queen Pōmare IV" are not immediately followed by references.
  • The hook image is interesting and free to use.TSventon (talk) 22:22, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Another hook issue, note 11 in the source says she was "More precisely, separated from her husband, as recorded in French archives under the 19th century legal term separée de corps (de la Grandville 2001: 22)." fr:Séparation de corps en France looks like separation rather than divorce. TSventon (talk) 13:41, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Thanks very much TSventon I think I have picked up these issues and those on the talk page. I'll propose a tweaked ALT so as to not include the marriage details:
ALT1 ... that Adèle de Dombasle helped pioneer women's exploration in Oceania and worked as an illustrator, drawing people such as Queen Pōmare IV (pictured)? Source: "Adèle de Dombasle managed to produce several tens of drawings during her travels in Polynesia (and Chile). These represent monuments and sites from the Marquesas, Tahitian and Marquesan inhabitants with elements of material culture, landscapes and portraits—including from historical figures such as Queen Pomaré." & the pioneer statement derives from the section in https://archaeologybulletin.org/articles/10.5334/bha-656 "Finding the Pacific Matildas" (first paragraph) Lajmmoore (talk) 19:58, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 26

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2024 Summer Paralympics opening ceremony

5x expanded by Hawkeye7 (talk). Was 1339 bytes, mow 7527 bytes Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 433 past nominations.

Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:45, 26 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Neutron stars in fiction

Computer simulation of a neutron star

  • ... that in fiction, neutron stars (pictured) harbour exotic lifeforms in their vicinity, on their surface, and even in their interior?

Improved to Good Article status by TompaDompa (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 22 past nominations.

TompaDompa (talk) 21:54, 26 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Approve hook and image Huh, I was just reading about usages of neutron stars in fiction the other day, so this is a funny coincidence (wait, I think I was literally reading the hook source article, whoa). Article was approved for GA on the 26th, so is new enough. At around 7000 characters, it is long enough. The article properly uses in-line citations and the copyvio detector finds no issues outside of the direct quotes used. The hook reads neutrally, is cited in-line (said reference is used in-line for much of the article besides, so easily meets that), and is interesting. The QPQ has been done and the image suggested is in the public domain and views fine on a smaller scale. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 02:39, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 27

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Walter Campbell Smith

  • ... that in retirement and after a long career of military and civil service Walter Campbell Smith changed his legal name to Walter Campbell-Smith?
  • Source: https://www.thegazette.co.uk/London/issue/41787/page/5027 - London Gazette, 1959 'Notice is hereby given that by a Deed Poll dated 21st July 1959, and enrolled in the Supreme Court of Judicature on 5th August 1959, I, WALTER CAMPBELL-SMITH ... Retired Civil Servant .. abandoned the surname of Smith. —Dated the 6th day of August 1959. W. Campbell-Smith, formerly Walter Campbell Smith.

5x expanded by Chaiten1 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

Chaiten1 (talk) 10:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   This is not a full review right now(I'll try and get that done in a little bit), but I personally believe the hooks aren't really interesting enough for DYK, ALT0, and definitely more so. I didn't spot any eye-catching facts in my very brief pre-skim, but if @Chaiten1: has any other hooks from the article, feel free to add. If anyone disagrees that these are interesting, please ping me so we can discuss. --PixDeVl yell talk to me! 23:38, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Thank you @PixDeVl: I have one more offline source to check out, but I will come up with a couple more hooks to try out. The guy served in two World Wars, was in the chemical weapons unit at the Somme, and published his last article at the age of 94, so I am sure there's something to be found. Here are two more:
  • ALT2 ..that Walter Campbell Smith's training in mineralogy led him to volunteer with the chemical warfare unit of British army during World War 1?
Source: Foulkes, Charles (1934). Gas! The story of the Special Brigade. William Blackwood and Sons, Edinburgh. p. 62. "The twelve volunteers joined at Helfaut ... and were of the greatest assistance in our first three gas attacks. ... Campbell Smith stayed on in the special brigade" [offline source]
Source: Journal of Gemmology, 1989 https://gem-a.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/11/JoG1989_21_8.pdf "culminated in a long paper based largely on his personal knowledge of 'Seventy Years of Research in mineralogy and crystallography in the Department of Mineralogy 1857-1927' which was published in 1982 when he was 94. Chaiten1 (talk) 16:59, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Awesome, thanks @Chaiten1:, I'll do the review soon. If you get any others from your offline source feel free to add and ping me. I'm leaning toward using ALT3 personally, but if you have something more interesting we can definitely go for it. --PixDeVl yell talk to me! 17:21, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Overall:   Looks good to me @Chaiten1: I'm going to WP:BOLDLY go ahead and give this full approval since I'm fairly confident in this being a compliment with the criteria(if someone disagrees please correct me). I will suggest before promoting that perhaps expanding ALT1 to mention who he beat(the guy who pioneered radiometric dating) would probably be interesting enough since beating someone who made such a significant contribution by being better at a now dead language is a fun tidbit. I'd leave it to you to pick which should be promoted(or the promoter, I admit I'm not familiar with the process of closing DYK noms, feel free to point me to the right page or explain it :p). PixDeVl yell talk to me! 17:53, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Sun Jianai

  • Source: Lin, Xiaoqing Diana (2005). Peking University: Chinese Scholarship and Intellectuals, 1898–1937. pp 15-27

Moved to mainspace by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 81 past nominations.

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:25, 28 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

@Generalissima: are you sure it's correct to say that Sun "founded" the university? The article doesn't quite state it in that way. It seems that technically the university was established by the first edict of the Guangxu Emperor as part of the Hundred Days' Reform? If it is correct, was he the sole founder or a co-founder? Onceinawhile (talk) 11:34, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi @Generalissima: sorry to be difficult but are you sure that is right? It doesn't say founder or co-founder anywhere in the article. This source says: "On July 3, 1898, Emperor Guangxu approved a report to implement the Imperial University of Peking and to draft its charter. Sun Jianai, a senior Chinese official, was appointed “guanli daxuetang shiwu dachen,” or the (education) minister for the imperial university's affairs." The "guanli daxuetang shiwu dachen" is zh:Category:管理大学堂事务大臣. If we are to use co-founder we will need a source stating that. Onceinawhile (talk) 19:10, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Onceinawhile: I felt that "was tasked to organize" works for "co-founded", but I'm okay deferring to an slightly alternate hook. How about
Alt1:… that Sun Jianai organized China's first national university in 1898?
(again citing the Lin 2005 source) Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:31, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Overall:   ALT1 good to go! Onceinawhile (talk) 21:08, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Peck Building

"Lorsque Christophe Derennes, aujourd’hui directeur général d’Ubisoft Montréal, s’est installé avec sa famille dans la métropole québécoise en 1997, il était loin de se douter que, 25 ans plus tard, le studio du quartier Mile-End deviendrait le plus important au monde, fort de ses 4000 personnes employées. [...] Ubisoft Montréal occupe les bureaux de l'édifice Peck depuis ses débuts dans le métropole québécoise."

Google-translated from French : "When Christophe Derennes, now general manager of Ubisoft Montreal, moved with his family to the Quebec metropolis in 1997, he was far from suspecting that, 25 years later, the studio in the Mile End district would become the largest in the world, with 4,000 employees. [...] Ubisoft Montreal has occupied the offices of the Peck Building since its beginnings in the Quebec metropolis."

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Improved to Good Article status by WikiFouf (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

WikiFouf (talk) 19:03, 29 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

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  • Interesting:   - Is this still true today? The source is from 2009, but the article doesn't mention this. Also, do all of the 1,900 employees work in the building?

Overall:   @WikiFouf: Nice work on the article. However, I had a concern about the hook. Epicgenius (talk) 14:25, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 28

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Ferrari FF

  • ... that the Ferrari FF (pictured) was, upon its release, the world's fastest four-seating car?
  • Source: [1] (accessible via ProQuest), [2] this one’s available as a link, otherwise you can access via ProQuest
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Improved to Good Article status by 750h+ (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

750h+ 16:26, 28 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Sorry for not getting back sooner. The table:
General: Article is new enough and long enough

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Overall:   No issues, easy pass. SirMemeGod17:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ Baker, Erin; Knapman, Chris (22 January 2011). "4WD Ferrari FF revealed". The Daily Telegraph. p. 9.
  2. ^ Neil, Dan (2 April 2011). "The coolest Ferrari ever—drive carefully". The Wall Street Journal. p. D.10. Retrieved 11 September 2024.

The New York Times Simulator

  • Source: 1 2

Moved to mainspace by Wasianpower (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

🌸⁠wasianpower⁠🌸 (talk • contribs) 23:14, 28 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   The article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, neutral and presentable. As the nominator has 5 or less DYK nominations, a QPQ is not required at this time. However, i note that alt0 is likely not interesting (WP:DYKINT) because in games like the Papa Louie series, its the player's responsibility to serve food to the best standards and also at a quick pace to keep the customer's happy. Good thing you provided an alternative hook. JuniperChill (talk) 00:37, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Frederick Prigg

  • Source: On p. 11 of the "Oregon Secretaries of State, Biographical Sketches, 1841-Present", it says John Edward Long was a physician, then goes on to say "Long served as secretary of the provisional government from May 25, 1844 to June 21, 1846. … He served in that position until he was drowned while fording the Clackamas River." In the next paragraph, the source says Frederick Prigg was a physician, then says "Prigg was appointed secretary of the provisional government to succeed Long … He fell to his death from a bluff into the Willamette River at Oregon City in October 1849." The same events are covered in Footnote 74 on p.36 of Bancroft’s History of Oregon, Volume II, but that source say Dr Long drown in the Willamette River at Oregon City (vice Clackamas River, which also flows through Oregon City). As a result, I decided not to name the river in the hook … instead of just said "river", which applies regardless of which river he drowned in.

Created by Orygun (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 121 past nominations.

Orygun (talk) 06:04, 28 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Overall:   Interesting fact. Article looks good. QPQ done. Appears good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:40, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Wilf Perreault

Wilf Perreault's There is Light on the Horizon

  • ... that Wilf Perreault's art work was influenced by artists such as Reta Cowley and Dorothy Knowles?
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Statue of John Stockton
  • Comment: Article came from draft today after 960 days. Images have all gone though VRT. COI has been properly addressed on authors user page and though the AfC process. Might be of interest for anyone interested in Canada and the Arts.

Moved to mainspace by Dr vulpes (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Dr vulpes (Talk) 15:48, 28 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article is new enough (just out of draft space), long enough and appropriately referenced. The images have appropriate permissions (CC-BY-SA etc). No copyvio problems. The hook is short enough, but perhaps is missing a word or two - are they landscape painters? Is there anything surprising about this? Should the hook link to these two as well? It probably just needs a tweak Chaiten1 (talk) 17:54, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  This looks good to me - QPQ done, and no other issues. Thank you! Chaiten1 (talk) 07:22, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Blanche Badcock

Created by UndercoverClassicist (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 27 past nominations.

UndercoverClassicist T·C 14:46, 28 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Overall:   Consider changing King's Prize to Sovereign's, since that's what's cited in the the OUP, though I understand this may be an anachronism. Will leave up to the promoter; otherwise good to go. ThaesOfereode (talk) 22:34, 28 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks -- "Sovereign's Prize" and "King's Prize" are the same thing, though there's another argument for "Sovereign's" (that no woman had ever shot for the prize while Victoria was on the throne). I've made that change. UndercoverClassicist T·C 10:19, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 29

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Charlotte Motor Speedway

  • Source: Muhleman, Max (July 19, 1960). "Repair job begins". The Charlotte News. pp. 4B. Archived from the original on February 3, 2024. Retrieved February 2, 2024 – via Newspapers.com. "The 600 will go down in history as the only race ever run in which drivers were forced to dodge track blemishes more often than other cars, and there can be no argument that the condition of the turns augmented the action in that inaugural event."

Improved to Good Article status by Nascar9919 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 684 past nominations.

 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:32, 29 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   @Crisco 1492: Article long enough and recent GA. Hooks are sourced, cited inline, and interesting. Specifically for ALT1, though isn't the "shotgun-toting driver" trying to get the workers back to work? Otherwise, ALT0 and ALT2 are both good to go. Juxlos (talk) 00:34, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Wing Sam Chinn

Chong Wa Benevolent Association Building

Improved to Good Article status by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 83 past nominations.

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough GA (what a really cool subject!). Hook is fascinating and within the parameters. Image looks good to go for running on the main page—maybe I'll write an article for the building? QPQ done. No concerns regarding refs, copyvio, etc. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:46, 1 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Neurocysticercosis

  • ... that neurocysticercosis has been referred to as the "great imitator" because it can mimic many other neurological disorders? Source: Garcia et al. 2014: " In endemic areas, neurocysticercosis is regarded as the great imitator because it can mimic almost any neurological disorder."
    • ALT1: ... that Küchenmeister showed that the consumption of cysticercus from pork caused human intestinal taeniasis by feeding a prisoner food that had cysticerci gathered from a recently killed pig? Source: Del Brutto et al. 2015: "Küchenmeister demonstrated that ingestion of cysticercus from pork resulted in human intestinal taeniasis, by feeding a convicted man, condemned to death, with sausages and a noodle soup both containing cysticerci obtained from a recently slaughtered pig."
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Created by IntentionallyDense (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:54, 29 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Quote supplied, matches hook, new enough (5x expanded), long enough, well written and looks good. Interesting. The lead image of this article will haunt me forever. Seems good to go. Alt1 is fine but less interesting, and also hard to follow + kind of tangential to this article. PARAKANYAA (talk) 18:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Comment completely unrelated to DYK eligibility, but is "e0008208" a page number? If it's for a figure it should use the loc= parameter. PARAKANYAA (talk) 18:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@PARAKANYAA: Thanks for the review! I agree that Alt1 is kind of odd and tangential so the first hook may be better. e0008208 is in fact a page number and not a figure. Some medical journals have really weird page numbers. IntentionallyDense (talk) 20:18, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
TIL. Thanks! PARAKANYAA (talk) 20:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Chocolate Room

  • ... that the original exhibition of art installation Chocolate Room was shut down after attracting an "army of ants"?

"In 1970, during the 35th Venice Biennale, Ruscha delivered just such an unexpected encounter in Chocolate Room, his only installation work to date... Unfortunately, in an ironic twist of fate, an army of ants invaded the room, causing the premature demise of the installation."

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Created by Rollinginhisgrave (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 09:27, 29 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

1

  • ... that 1 is its own square, square root, and factorial?
  • Reviewed:

Improved to Good Article status by Polyamorph (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Polyamorph (talk) 12:36, 29 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Congratulations on the Good Article status! This article is newly promoted to Good Article, and is sufficiently long and well cited. The Copyvio pulls up a flag to an obscure pdf, which must be an example of the reverse (pdf using text from wikipedia). The hook is excellent, terse and to the point but a tease that draw the readers in; if only to marvel at how you can write an encyclopedia entry on '1'. Hook source checks out. QPQ not required for the nominator. Approved! Chaiten1 (talk) 13:07, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Polyamorph and Chaiten1: What is your opinion of the hook ALT1: ... that many older typewriters do not have a dedicated key for the numeral 1?--Launchballer 14:56, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
I prefer my proposed hook as its a fundamental property of the number itself. Polyamorph (talk) 15:02, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
No worries then.--Launchballer 15:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Polyamorph and Launchballer, sorry for disrupting. But apparently, is it possible we add some wiklinks about those three? To me, readers may not understand about mathematical terms. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 23:35, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Factorial maybe, although square and square root are surely common terms.--Launchballer 23:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
I did consider wikilinks, the issue is that the wikilink 1 is small, even when bolded. I wanted to make sure that users focus was on the link to 1 and not some other non-GA article. But I would support a wikilink to factorial (which is a GA), and indeed square (algebra) and square root if these would be helpful. Polyamorph (talk) 05:44, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on September 30

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Margaret Pargeter

  • ... that Margaret Pargeter was one of the most widely read authors in Britain in 1986?

5x expanded by Cielquiparle (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 65 past nominations.

Cielquiparle (talk) 03:48, 3 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Review: Hook fact is cited in the article to an RS, and is sufficiently interesting; hook length is ok; earwig copyvio shows no issues; DYK check shows 5 x expansion so article is valid for DYK: Assuming article is at 5x now, expansion began 60 edits ago on September 29, 2024; 223 characters to 4,485 characters is actually a 20x expansion; article is long enough; article is presentable, stable and fully cited (note it was recently saved from AfD by the nominator); QPQ done. Either hook considered acceptable. Good stuff! ResonantDistortion 08:38, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Magic (play)

5x expanded by ThaesOfereode (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

ThaesOfereode (talk) 00:47, 1 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • Review
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

Overall:   The first hook seems most attractive and has been checked out thoroughly. It's the one that works best with the picture as I like the way that it identifies all the people. I haven't been able to run Earwig yet and want to do so as there's a lot of quotations and plot to consider. There are also some copy-editing niggles such as some Americanisms and the crooked lead image but I may take care of those myself pending the final review.
(<later>I've made a copy-editing pass and run Earwig and it's reasonably good to go now. Andrew🐉(talk) 07:46, 3 October 2024 (UTC)) Andrew🐉(talk) 19:26, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, Andrew. I agree that the first hook is far and away the best one, with or without the image (though obviously much better with it). I would appreciate any and all copy-editing edits from you, especially for the Americanisms; I tried my best to conform to British English standards, but my eye for it is by no means perfect. Hopefully Earwig will be up and running shortly. ThaesOfereode (talk) 20:58, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
You're welcome. It was the centre/center spelling that caught my eye. I'm making a copy-editing pass through the article and addressing some pleonasm and other issues too. Feel free to push back if you disagree. Andrew🐉(talk) 21:30, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
All excellent suggestions/fixes; I have a tendency for unnecessary periphrasis. I pushed back on minor quibbles – mostly with the plot and character descriptions, having spent quite some time reading and re-reading the play – but I believe all the changes should still be well in line with British standards. ThaesOfereode (talk) 00:12, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

  The Earwig score was 3% which is negligible. The extensive quotes and lengthy synopsis are debatable but I don't consider these to be show-stoppers and so we can move forward. Andrew🐉(talk) 07:43, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Great, thanks! ThaesOfereode (talk) 11:58, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Operation Concrete

  • Source: Brody, Richard (2008). Everything Is Cinema: The Working Life of Jean-Luc Godard (1. ed ed.). New York: Metropolitan Books, p. 33. ISBN 978-0-8050-6886-3.
  • ALT1: ... that while shooting his first short film, Jean-Luc Godard was barred from his mother's funeral for stealing? Source: Brody, Richard (2008). Everything Is Cinema: The Working Life of Jean-Luc Godard (1. ed ed.). New York: Metropolitan Books, p. 33. ISBN 978-0-8050-6886-3.
  • Reviewed:

5x expanded by Lbal (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Lbal (talk) 23:49, 30 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Article meets eligibility criteria. No issues with tone. Referencing seems alright, but, is sourced to offline sources. I will AGF on those offline sources. Assuming AGF on plagiarism checks as well. No QPQ needed.

Both hooks are interesting. However, to validate both of the hooks, please can I get the relevant sections from the offline sources quoted here? Ktin (talk) 05:20, 1 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

User:Ktin Hi, sorry if my reply is not properly formatted, I'm still working on learning some aspects of Wikipedia. I've linked a Google Books copy of the source at the bottom of the page itself in the Works Cited section, but it is also at this link as well: https://books.google.com/books?id=Nf_uKU6bYRYC&pg=PA25&source=gbs_toc_r&cad=2#v=onepage&q&f=false — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lbal (talkcontribs) 19:11, 1 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

The Hillbilly Thomists

Created by Pbritti (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 53 past nominations.

Pbritti (talk) 12:50, 30 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

Overall:   I’m not at all an experienced reviewer (or editor for that matter) but I believe I understand the DYK criteria well rn to try and help out with the backlog, so if anyone else has comments or if I did something wrong by all means please bring them up! I’d like to particularly request a second opinion on the image licensing (since I’m not sure how having people in a self work affects things). PixDeVl yell talk to me! 16:10, 1 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative

Created by Yue (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 22 past nominations.

Yue🌙 08:36, 30 September 2024 (UTC).Reply

Articles created/expanded on October 1

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Shah Budak

  • Reviewed:

Improved to Good Article status by Aintabli (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Aintabli (talk) 18:26, 2 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Sourced in article, passed GA recently, generally well written, interesting enough, my only issue is the hook is phrased weirdly in the last half in a way that feels strangely ambiguous. "in retaliation for the same treatment his son Feyyaz received?" can you think of another way to say this? Also maybe don't mention the name of his son; possibly do "in retaliation for the same having been done to his son"? PARAKANYAA (talk) 20:14, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Alt1 ... that Shah Budak, a prince of the Anatolian Dulkadir dynasty, blinded his nephew Shahruh in retaliation for his son's similar fate? @PARAKANYAA: How does it sound now? Aintabli (talk) 15:12, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
  I still think that phrasing is slightly awkward, but it's better and less ambiguous. PARAKANYAA (talk) 18:47, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Eunus

Bronze alloy coin minted by Eunus under the name of King Antiochus. On the obverse is the head of Demeter, while the reverse shows a grain ear.

  • Source: Urbainczyk, Theresa (2014). Slave Revolts in Antiquity, pp. 52, 56. Park Square, Milton Park, Abingdon, 711 Third Avenue, New York, NY 10017, USA: Routledge. ISBN 978-1-84465-101-6.
  • Reviewed:

Improved to Good Article status by Harren the Red (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Harren the Red (talk) 18:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Image eligibility:

Overall:   Article is new enough, well sourced, hook is interesting and QPQ is completed. I don't see anything that would hold this back from DYK, so I approve. Only thing I will say is that I don't think this image should be used, as I don't find it particularly informative, and the caption is also quite long. However, if anyone disagrees, feel free. TheBritinator (talk) 22:42, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

On a second look, it would appear that the website the image is sourced from declares that the image is published under a CC BY-NC-SA 4.0 license, which would make it incompatible with commons. If I am missing something, please feel free to correct me. TheBritinator (talk) 22:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
I can certainly edit the caption to be shorter (more concise), but from what I gather the image is a no go? I am not the original uploader of it to Commons, nor am I super familiar with copyright, so I will defer that judgement to you, though the image on commons itself says CC 4.0 international license. Also, would I edit the caption here, submit a new entry, or something else? How does the process work exactly? Thank you! Harren the Red (talk) 23:16, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Harren the Red:, no need for a new nomination, we'd just not use the image. Is that good for you? TheBritinator (talk) 13:33, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@TheBritinator:, yes, certainly! Thank you for the help :) Harren the Red (talk) 15:39, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Sounds good, then I approve of the hook. TheBritinator (talk) 16:15, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Jamaludin Malik (legislator)

Created by Juxlos (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 229 past nominations.

Juxlos (talk) 05:39, 1 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

@Juxlos: Should be less than 24 hours, ideally. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:39, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Overall:   Article looks good. Interesting hook. Only issue is QPQ pending, something that should be addressed quickly. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:32, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

What A Merry-Go-Round

Created by Premeditated Chaos (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 56 past nominations.

PMC(talk) 01:15, 3 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • Will review this. - SchroCat (talk) 08:52, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Article is new enough, long enough. It's well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant, copyvio-free and 'presentable'.
    Hook is cited by reliable source (to which I don't have access, but will AGF), short enough and interesting
    Image (in article, not part of the DYK) is correctly licensed (on Commons)
    QPD done and no other problems or issues that need flagging.

  Happy to green-light this. - SchroCat (talk) 09:08, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

1997 Saint-Casimir mass suicide

  • Source: Coleman, Loren L. (2004). "Cultic Copycats". The Copycat Effect: How the Media and Popular Culture Trigger the Mayhem in Tomorrow's Headlines. Simon & Schuster. ISBN 978-1-4165-0554-9, p. 84. "On March 22, 1997, just as the Heaven’s Gate thirty-nine were dying by suicide, a documentary film about the Order of the Solar Temple cult aired on French television, and, in what was probably not a coincidence, five members of the Order of the Solar Temple killed themselves that day in a “Christic Fire.”
  • Reviewed:

Improved to Good Article status by PARAKANYAA (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

PARAKANYAA (talk) 01:05, 2 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

QPQ:  
Overall:   IntentionallyDense (talk) 01:45, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply