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• "The Right Stuff came in second with seven eight" - so which was it? :-)

• Fixed: Removed the word "seven" since the film received eight nominations.

• There's two full stops at the end of Hal Roach's honorary award citation

• Fixed: Removed the extra period at the end of the Hal Roach citation.

• "with 30.3% of households watching over a 50 share" - what's a "50 share"?

• A share is the number of households with their TV on that are tuned in or watching a specific program. This is different than a rating which is based on all television sets in households regardless if the television is on or not. They are explained in the Nielsen rating article.
  • Apologies, but even after reading that other article I still can't grasp what is being expressed here. I understand that 30.3% of households were watching the show, but what does "over a 50 share" mean? That 50% of all TVs which were switched on were watching it? Over 50% of all TVs which were switched on (and if so, how much over? Over 50% covers everything from 51% to 100%)? Or something else....? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:02, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    • @ChrisTheDude:I have a hard to time explaining it, but this is what I understand. The first number (30.3) represents the rating or the percentage of households with a TV (REGARDLESS of if the television set was on or off) that were tuned in to the program. The second number (50), the share, ONLY counts television sets/households that had their TV turned on during the program's duration. So 50 percent of TV's that were in USAGE DURING THE LENGTH OF THE CEREMONY were tuned in to that program. I can remove the share number if you find it confusing or unnecessary. The reason newer ceremonies don't have the share number is because fewer media outlets don't report the share number as often. They focus on the viewership total and 18-49 rating.

--Birdienest81 (talk) 03:26, 17 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

In that case would "with a 50 share" work? I think it's the use of the word "over" that confused me...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:29, 17 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: - Done: Changed "over" to "with" to now read "with a 50 share".--Birdienest81 (talk) 04:44, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Think that's all I've got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:28, 4 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: - I've addressed your comments above, accordingly.

--Birdienest81 (talk) 09:04, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed: Added comma between "Angeles" and "beginning".

• "for the fifth time. He first" merge to avoid very short sentence.

• Fixed: Changed sentence to read "Comedian and talk show emcee Johnny Carson hosted the show for the fifth time." I feel that the "He first hosted..." flows better with the "and last hosted."

• "42.1 million" non-breaking space.

• Fixed: Added nbsp template to mixed number figures.

• Link Nielsen ratings in the infobox.

• Fixed: Nielsen ratings is linked in the infobox.

• "February 16, 1984 by" comma after year.

• Fixed: Added comma after the year and before "by"

• "Swedish - directed" etc, all should be en-dashes.

• Fixed: Added en-dashes with nbsp consistent with earlier ceremony lists that were promoted to FL status.

• I don't see the purpose in having sortable "role" column when it's free text.

• Fixed: Made role column unsortable

• "Pacuła " needs a diacritic.

• Fixed: Added a diacritic.

• "Jack Haley, Jr. " drop the comma.

• Fixed: Dropped comma in said name.

• "host Johnny Carson would host" repetitive.

• Fixed: It now reads "host Johnny Carson would host over emceeing duties".

• "72.9 million" etc, non-breaking spaces.

• Fixed: Also added nbsp template to mixed number figures.

• "on ABC drew" link ABC.

• Fixed: Linked American Broadcasting Company in the ratings paragraph.

• Ref 35 should be en-dash, not spaced hyphen.

• Fixed: Added en-dash to reference.

• ISBNs should be consistently formatted.

• Fixed: Changed ISBN format to 978 prefix ones that are the same format.

• "Internet Movie Database" or "IMDb"? Be consistent.

• Fixed: Changed Internet Movie Database into IMDb.

• "directed by Marty Pasetta" is mentioned in the lead, but nowhere else, should be in the main body too.

• Fixed: Added sentence mentioning Pasetta in the second paragraph where it begins "Several others participated....".

That's it on a first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:26, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• @The Rambling Man: I have addressed all your comments and have made the adjustments.

--Birdienest81 (talk) 06:36, 27 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• "won five awards including" → "won five awards, including"

• Fixed: Added a comma between "awards" and "including".

• "the third writer-director-producer to win three Oscars for the same film" – no clear source (is it ref. 9?)

• Fixed: Added citation from book I removed earlier.

• Fix double dash next to Jack Nicholson

• Fixed: Removed excess dash.

• Don't use semicolon for heading for "Jean Hersholt Humanitarian Awards" (see H:DL)

• Fixed: Changed semicolon heading to subheading.

• Second table header should be "Films with multiple wins", not "Films with multiple nominations"

• Fixed: Changed "nominations" to "wins" in second table under "Films with multiple..."

• "from Fort Worth Star-Telegram" → "from the Fort Worth Star-Telegram"

• Fixed: added a "the" before the title of said newspaper.

• Fix "See also" wikilink to avoid redirect

• Fixed: Renamed wikilink to actual title of list that is consistent with other FL Oscar ceremony lists.

• Assuming the bibliography should be alphabetized, Wiley & Bona should come after Terrance

• Fixed: Rearranged bibliography to alphabetical order by surname.

• In external links, "Official website" → "official website" (occurs twice)

• Fixed: Made "official" lowercase in both instances.

• In external links, say "at Filmsite" and "at IMDb", similar to final link

• Fixed: Added "at" before Filmsite and IMDb.

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 05:06, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• @RunningTiger123: - I have made corrections based on all your comments,

--Birdienest81talk 09:42, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]